That was so sad.
And incredibly well written.

beautiful ^^

I hate to say this, but I'm really very impressed. I've seen some of your work in the LotR, and although I'm not that familiar with the fandom, it all looks amazing as this. Wow, to sum it all up.

In particular, I like the way you weave your minor characters in; - the dead Dearborns, the Prewetts and the Beggar - it's not exactly vital to the plot, but a nice touch to set the scene, nonetheless. Your descriptions of scenes, of actions, are all brilliant.

The only bit of criticism I can care to find is cliches, (claw-like fingernails much?) and some overly long sentences needing more commas, but I'm not so sure about it now I think harder. Your spelling and grammar is perfect. Well done, again...

Powerful, powerful stuff!! Absolutly wonderfully written!! Completely in character, and describtive. So beautiful! I loved it. Please continue writing HP Fics! You're a natural!

Really gorgeous. Beautiful, actually. It was written well and I can't think of a way to make it more canon than you all ready had it.

Real nice! To be cliche, you could've cut the tension with a knife. =) You really did Snape justice, too. (just my two cents)

this was powerfully written and really enjoyable! You've managed to write it realistic-ly without the cheese and overkill that seems to be exist in some of the other fics. An excellent piece of work, thank you! ^^

This was very good! Well done!

oh, how powerful and sad!

Poor Lily, lost her friend to the Death Eaters. Well written though. However, I'll admit for a bit I was worried about it being a romantic Lily/Severus.

ah, i loved it, it seemed like something that could really happen :) adding it to favs

Very well written and very sad, but good.

Very well-written, but very sad. Thanks for sharing this! I thought it was particularly interesting that her way of offering reconciliation was to trust him with a bit of her family's secret - that they were going into hiding - not realizing that his warning/request to Dumbledore was the reason behind that decision. And he didn't tell her that he was trying to save her, that he was working with Dumbledore and pleading with Voldemort...all very interesting. Because I think the real point of this story was that once she realized he was a Death Eater, he experienced the shame of it through her reaction, shame that his own conscience had been too twisted and broken to feel on its own. It was good, too, that she called him out for blaming James for their estrangement and not recognizing his own culpability. It was all very complicated and believable, and yet still sad, especially when one thinks that they never saw each other again. You wrote the scene very well, with lots of telling details. And his little line, "No one seems to tell me anything else," was a welcome bright spot in a dark story. Thanks again!