This is pretty good. Didn't even realize it was about Jack's clone at first.

Really well written. I enjoyed it.

really cool, hope to read a sequel

Well done.

Wow. This is wonderful. You found a really fantastic perspective on Clone!Jack that I had never really thought of before and you wrote it beautifully. Thanks for posting.

Very, very good! Intense, lots of action, touching in the right places and Mini-Jack is absolutely in character: that's how I think he would have acted in that kind of situation. Bravo!

This was a wonderfully sweet take with the character mini-Jack. Well crafted passages that communicated various states of emotions. Apprehension, fear, cheer (yes, when Jack was kicking tail) and surprising me with a lump in the throat moment at the end. Thank you for writing this.

As the original author of "Adopted Kids Are Chosen" I have to say BRAVO! Excellent remix. Wonderful. I loved it. You fleshed out the story even more than I could have imagined. Taking Mary's Point Of View is brilliant. Good Job. Having Jack O'Neill for a big brother is a daunting prospect. I loved the epilogue tag at the end. Great angst. Great message.

Thank You.

Livi aka Stargatebabe

Hey, this is a really fantastic companion piece! Very well done.

Thanks a lot for writing it, it was great fun to read! :D I hope you've written more minijack related works.. (Wanders off to find out)

That was definetly different! I realy liked it. :)

Great story...really liked the little sister point of view and the fact that he inspired her. Thanks!

A very good story and a nice companion to "Adopted Kids Are Chosen."