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| like2CUhappy24-7 2007-11-25 ch 14, | abuseomg amazing love this story. hope u keep writing more awesome stories like this one |
| JLarah 2007-09-29 ch 14, | abuseHey .. it's me, your terrible reviewer who takes weeks to read two chapters. I'm so sorry I've been so busy.:( Well, reviewing the last two chapters: I didn't understand why Luke couldn't be in the delivery room to help Lorelai and be there for her. But anyway, I'm glad everything worked out fine and they had a healthy baby girl. :D I love that her name is Lauren!! YAY!! :D And Emily?! UAU!! Emily must be really proud and it's a great gesture from Lorelai! And Lory! LOL It's funny, but it may be confusing sometimes. lol :D And they got married! :D I'd have liked to see Lory's role in the wedding! lol Was she on a stroll? On somebody's lap? But other than that, it was great, and I'm glad you didn't take too much time describing the whole ceremony. As much as I like the idea of LL getting married, I don't particularly like reading the description of the wedding. It's always the same thing and it tends to get boring. So, I think you (well, the author, but you know what I mean) did it perfectly. Not too much, not too less. Lorelai getting home to find Luke and their little girl making cookies together is an adorable picture. And they did get a dog! Bobby! It's not a Paul Anka, but I'm sure it's just as weird and funny as him, because it's still a Lorelai's dog. lol :D I'm curious about how old Lory was in that scene. I guess 3 or 4, since Rory's still in Harvard.. And speaking of Rory, I'm not sure it they would want to get rid of Rory's bedroom to make it a room for their new babies, especially since Rory has not officially moved out and it's still in college. It brought me flashbacks from s7 and Chris wanting to transform Rory's bedroom in a bedroom for Gigi. I think, after s7, I'm too sensitive for certain things. But other than that, I'm so happy they're having their twins!! LL having twins is fate! It was Lorelai's dream, although she didn't have a daughter with Luke already in her dream, oh .. well, we don't know that. She could still be asleep. :D It's fun to think about that. And it's the end! :( I have to congratulate you. You did an amazing job translating this fic. I'm in awe! And you really should be proud of it! You rock, girl! :D |
| Braelyn Rae 2007-09-17 ch 14, | abuseShort is right, and very fast paced... but I loved it! Good job and update soon! ... please! |
| pjt-gg 2007-09-17 ch 14, | abuseGreat story, looking forward to the next one, hint,hint... |
| remoob1513 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abuseaw this was so so so sweet but please tell me that there will be a sequel to this. i LOVED it but I WANT MORE! SEQUEL?! |
| Jeremy Shane 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abusegood chapter & i hope there's a seqel |
| lancer1993 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abuseBit of a quick ending but nice to see them together and that's what counts. |
| lukeandlorelaidanes 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abusei absolutely loved this story you are an amazing writer but we know it's was all god given talent. luke loves lorelai x |
| Samvalasam 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abuseLOVED IT! im screaming 'Sequel' here lol :D sam |
| ggandothlover 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abuseThis story was absolutly amazing. It was very entertaing and well-written. You are a very talented author. You should most definately wuthout a doubt make a sequel. so good. hope to read more soon :) Dani |
| Ms Kitten 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abuseHmm... The story's nice, but the ending felt a bit anticlimactic for me. I get that it's natural that a love story ends up with a wedding or a birth or both, or the pregnancy announcement, but whenever it does there's this side of me that feels disappointed, because I wanted to see what happens beyond that. And when the ending is a short as this was, well then I can't help but feel that someone has walked in while I was watching a good movie and turned the tv off right in front of me... It feels too abrupt, too sudden... :( |
| chants 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abuseThat was a very cute ending. Maybe someday you can do a sequel with the twins. |
| crazygirl85 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abusefirst of all i will say one more time how a great job you did with translating this fic...i absolutely loved every part of it..this ch is awsome, i just wished it would be a little longer...Lory sound so cute, and i'm glad she's pregnant again, with twins *sigh* now we need sequel, you hear me SEQUEL :D thank you for this fic, i enjoyed reading it :) sanja! |
| LorLukealways 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abuseI always love a happy ending. Luke needs twin boys this go 'round. great job :) |
| The Mrs.Ventimiglia 2007-09-16 ch 14, | abuseAww, what a cute ending. I really am surprised it ended there, though. But great job. This was a great fic from beginning to end. |