I LOVE how Jack repeats what he's said to Will to James! It's so funny! I also love Di! She's rather unconventional for a Pirate Lord, but it's a good thing.

What? Jack's DYING? jk jk

All jesting aside, this is a rather weird story. Atleast there's a plot, but this all seems rather fast, and... well, weird. Your word choice has strange conotaions.(If I spelled that right) and it looks... as if it's not going in the direction your summary hinted. Slow it down please. I would like some backround info on some characters.