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RogueOnFire 2008-09-04 ch 17,	abuseOh, I understand how you feel when it seems no one cares enough to review. I'm sorry to say I've been reading and not reviewing. This story seems okay, but I don't understand why the deception between Charles and Erik is necessary. What's the point of two old men fighting over a girl? What's the point you are trying to accomplish with this story? What do you picture the end being? Try to figure out how to make the story fit your plan, unless it takes a life of its own. If you don't believe me, it's true. I've seen it happen with some of my own stories. ROF
RogueOnFire 2008-08-22 ch 15, anon.	abuseI have been reading but just didn't feel compelled to review. now I am complying with your request. I don't know what to say on this story because, I don't know, it's different and I don't know where it will go or what expectations should be. Don't try to get too complicated, though, just enough so that it intrigues, but the storyline must be clear and easy to follow. Please don't give up on this story. I love to hear that encouragement, so it is what I pass to you. Press on! ROF
nooneknew 2008-08-09 ch 14,	abusethis story is getting better well done please finish it soon
animegirl333 2008-06-27 ch 1,	abusehey me again i realy like chap 7 XD i wonder who's lily going to choose.
animegirl333 2008-06-25 ch 6,	abusehm it's diffrent from thee love fics i read,but it's quite good XD keep it up.
Takerslady 2007-11-19 ch 15,	abuseGood chapter, update soon.
Takerslady 2007-11-19 ch 14,	abuseI wonder what Jean's gonna do now. Good chapter.
Monker 2007-10-12 ch 14,	abusean exelant chapter, my friend! I'm sorry you haven't heard much from me lately but there are a whole load of reasons for that which I won't go into now. This chapter was great, if not a little short. But oh well...not all of them can be four-thousand words long. I must say that it was interesting getting to see the ticked Charles. It would typically be very hard to picture him as enraged as he was, but you seemed to make it possible. And Mystique seemed pretty brave. If I turned around and saw Xavier standing there like that, with eyes like daggers, then I think I would have turned into the bird right away. But she actually stayed to chat with the guy? like is said... bravery. For a thouroughly random reason, my favorite part was this though... "The chairs looked interested in throwing themselves out the window." lol, I don't know why but that was just about the funniest thing you could have sasid at that moment. It cracked me up! lol... All together, very well done and I look foward to the next chapter. --Monker P.S. do you recall me offering the idea of a training session between Charles and Lily? Where they can't seem to keep their mind off of the other person so they cannot consantrait? And things get little romantic? Well, I understand if you don't want to add that in to "Buying Love". But do you think you might want to consider making it into a oneshot between Charlse and Lily? I really want to read something like that but I cannot think of someone who would write it better, and I certainly don't want to write it myself because I'll screw it up. Anyway...you don't have to do it, but you can at least think about it if you want.
Takerslady 2007-09-28 ch 13,	abuseYeah, the AP Exam, it sucks but I have to take them. I don't plan on letting all this work go to waste lol. Good chapter, update soon. :)
Takerslady 2007-09-26 ch 12,	abuseHow'd Mystique manage to get in the Mansion? I'm in AP classes, yeah they're challenging, we don't have PAP classes to get us ready, you're lucky. :)
XChocolateChipX 2007-09-25 ch 12,	abuseOh, I'm desperate to know what happens to Lily! ~Chip
telegb 2007-09-24 ch 12,	abusegah! no! stupid mystique. update soon!
Takerslady 2007-09-09 ch 11,	abuseGood chapter.
Monker 2007-09-08 ch 11,	abusehey there! Another great chapter. Her reaction to the thunder was cute...like a small child. But his reactino to her reaction was anything but childish! lol. The kiss was great (have you noticed I really love the kissage?hehe)...really great! And I'm relieved that the student knocked first. It might be a little tramatic if he or she just barged on in and found their professor and his servant makeing out. lol great chapter though. looking foward to the next one! PM me if you need ideas.
Monker 2007-08-28 ch 10,	abuseOk...sorry it took me so long to review..but I only just now had a moment when I could read these two updates. I was out of town and unable to get online long enough to read any fanfiction. But I've read your chapters now...and I must say...what chapters they were! I thought that your scene taking place between Mystique and Lilly was great and truly in character for them both. I loved Lilly's reaction to Mystique when she morphed (if that's even how you spell that dumb word) into Charles, it was perfect. And good on Lilly for escaping! I thought that you would surely have Charles jump in there somewhere and save the day. But I suppose that could have turned into a rather messy fight between Erik and Charles. So you probably made the right choice. I'm glad you explained the lack of pursuit on CatMan's (Sabertooth's) part. I, along with Takerslady, was curious about it. So good job at explaining it. Ok...I loved how, when Charles found her, he didn't just start kissing the stuffing out of her. The only kisses in the whole chapter were one in the forehead and one on the cheek. Really simple...really sweet. And I loved how he was so concerned that Erik may have done something to her. It again showed his protectiveness over her. A little disappointed that Lilly felt the need to lie to Charles. But can one really do that? Lie to a telepathic? Or once more, FOOL a telepathic? I mean, could he not just read her thoughts and know that she was withholding something from him. When he asked her if Erik had kept his distance, and she immediately remembered the kiss (which convinced her that she needed to lie), could Xavier not see immediately the images of the kiss that must have flashed through her mind? Would those images not concern him in the least? Just something that crossed my mind. Oh...and the crying...it was either from relief...or, when she hugged him, she stepped on his foot and it hurt really bad. lol, merely joking (put away the claws)! Umm...no...I'd say it was relief. Yes...definitely relief

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