i loved it!
but, are they still studying in hogwarts?!
please do replyÜ

i loved it!

Aw! I really liked this. Don't listen to that other person. This was very sweet and to the point. It will definitely be going on my favorite list.

There was no plot, no anything except a bit of plodding, unexciting, unoriginal smut. Boring. Not to mention you took the easy way out on explaining their relationship...which was, you didn't at all. Plain dialogue, very short. I think you should actually aim to add something to the world when you write, not just be content with throwing your lot in the bottom half of the heap and hoping someone likes it. Even the sex was boring. Try harder, your writing isn't bad. You could come up with something good using a little effort.

This is a very sweet story. ^_^ I LOVE it.

Nice and sweet. Liked it very much.

Oh, how sweet!! Aww. I love that they're married. So cute! ^_^ Yay.