I love it and I hoe you post soon

Update! Update! Update!

Ok typically i don't go for a Mary-Sue but for you i'll make an exception. This is a very funny and a very good story. Keep at it and hope for an update soon. :)

Eew, Axel smokes? Major strike for me. No dating. lol.

And yes, I came on Fanfic just because you told me you FINALLY updated (like I'm one to talk). Great chapter, as always. I really liked the little detail about Zexion getting "slight snowblindness"

I'll work on updating, but to tell you the truth something about the whole boner-boy deal makes it hard for me to focus on the story. Everything turns out sulky and emo-sounding. Maybe I should try to work on a different story for a little while.

How about that colab we've been talking about forever, huh?

hey i really enjoyed this. i just love Axel, he's so mean.

Pretty funny character! I liked it all. Though the only thing that was a stretch was the whole WOW your a video game character thing. A person who doesn't play the game or care about it would have taken more time to believe it, and not emphasize the whole 'character' thing without a bit of reluctance. If she was more 'wary' of who he really was it would be a lot more convincing and would show another side of her character. Keep going!