i love the chemistry between mrs. coulter and asriel in this story! update soon!

Please, please, please write more of this. It's beautiful. Truly.

this is really good

update soon

Awesome! :D I love the morning pillow scene. Great job! Please continue!

Why is her husband allowing her to go by herself? I'm a little confused...

/screams/ omg you updated! yay! lol. hope my persistent pms weren't too annoying ;).

yay so I'm now dying for more again lol. keep the good stuff coming!

yay!

updates!

xD

Can't wait for the next one, I lurve your story!

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Thank you Thank You for writing this, I recently became infactuated with this pair and I love your take on them! I hope you keep the updates coming!

Yay! I was so excited to see an update! This was a great chapter - you've really described everything well, and I am looking forward to the next chapter. Happy Holidays!

An update :D Yay!

Awesome, as always. I wish I could say something else-I know how people like long reviews-but I honestly don't know what.

Loving the story.

Hey! GREAT JOB! I can't even begin to say how you've kept the original tone of the books and how the characters are so...in character!

These chapters seem like excerpts from the actual books! Please continue D.

PLEASE CONTINUE.

Amazing. I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Wow. Absolutely love it.

Please write another chapter..

This is amazing. A great couple, I love the romance between them: there was not enough in the books.

Oh, this is definitely worth following. Your characterisation is perfect and spot on, the story flows perfectly... and... yeah, from the grievous therelack of Marisa/Asriel fic there is here, I love it.

_ You write brilliant. What else is there to say, except maybe I don't want to see the end because the end is going to be tragic, and even so, what happens until the end is REACHED will be damn well worth it.