Woah, kids, hold up. o.O I think there is a deficiency in chocolate going around. Get some to V, quick-like. ;)

So happy for another chappie!

I loves me some Tony/Bronwyn. =D Great job, can't wait for Somewei's next chapter.

Cadettes, Miss Arlint, all the instructors, me, Bronwyn and, hell, even Laura, would be burned should someone in DCI found out about

found should be find

like a ‘dark irony’ laugh. It’s the only **I could describe it. I stared at him blankly as he laughed like some joke from the universe had

** need something here like 'way'

great story!

This turned out GREAT! Tension! Anger! Frustration! Hooray!

And I'm actually at a point where I need a break from the other stories I'm working on. I'll start the next chapter this week. I miss Bronwyn.

wow...
intensity to the max...

i never really thought it would end up this way...
well..i think i did..but i didnt want to believe it.

intense intense intense

thats about the only good word i can think of...

AMAZING chapter!

definatly well worth the wait

sory i couldnt get to this sooner..
ive had comp issues for a while hehe

The One And Only
~PitMaster

browyn better stay with tony.
no splitting them up like all the other couples...
they belong together.

Hey, this is an awesome story. When Issac broke up with Vanessa, I couldn't believe it!! After everything they went through in Want! How dare he!!

Well, somehow I saw it coming anyway. Keep up the good work guys, this has me on the edge of my seat!

Much love
-El'Linda

A-MA-ZA-ZING
honestly
definitely not what i was thinking of with the vanessa/brannon love realization thing
but still a very good twist
especially with the 'top 3 or downgrade' rule
i like it =D

Woot!! A new chapter!!. Please, please, please update soon.

PS You do an AMAZING break up scene. Like, very realistic, I think we all feel Vanessa's pain...I want to give her a hug!

Oh wait, it looks like Brannon's already doing that...

Shocking, i figured it would be the other way around. great chapter update soon!

love always
tempos84578

this chapter was long awaited but well worth it!
GREAT job on this one sis =D
looks like things are taking a change for the somewhat better
cant wait to see what happens...

much much love!
~.:PitMaster

Wow...that's some intense stuff. Poor V! It's about time she realized that Issac wasn't the dreamy drum major he was in 'Want'. Can't wait for the next chapter!

when is this going to be updated?? im going crazy.

i cant wait to see what happens next... =]