My gosh that was good. Sometimes I was laughing, othertimes I wanted to cry, you really know your stuff.

I think optimus did well as a human.I am proud of his courage through all that.well done autobot leader. welcome back dear Jazz!

Poor Optimus):

Can I strangle Barricade now?
PLEASE~?!!

Wow! This is absolutely amazing! I loved every little bit of this story, from Optimus' very detailed transformation into a human to his confusion and experiences of the human world to the revenge of Seymour to the place between life and death where Optimus went to Jazz's return and Optimus' wakening ... just everything was written wonderfully here! It was interesting how you did it from different points of view, ranging from Optimus, Sam, Ironhide, Simmons, etc. Your portrayals of all these characters were perfect and I can't seem to find any more words to say how undeniably awesome this fic was. Great job!

This story was gripping. i especiaslly like Jazz back. I wonder who the mech is at end. Please let me know if you add to this.

A very good ending to a very good story. But you never did tell us: just what did happen to Simmons? He was turning all good there, got shot, then dissapeared. What happened to him?

Oh my...

Wow! This is actually a really good little fanfic!

I love it!

Excellent job!

“I’ve got friends in high places… need a lift? Call 1-800 Epps-we-need-a-freaking-ride.” Lennox smiles and the man behind him snorts,


Bwahahahaha! That got me cracking up. Good job.

Yay! Jazz!!

...*looks at the end* Oh snap. D:

Simmons!? No. D:

(And oh snap. I almost pity the bad guys when the Autobots get there. ALMOST.)

YOU SON OF A (%(^*%*^%(*%^*%! *glare at Seymour*

*hopes Simmons will do something*

Congratulations on a fantastic story -- I really enjoted it, thanks.

Yeah, tis finished. Hehe I liked the fact that The old primes sent Jazz back, very nifty explaination of getting that one out of the way ^_^

Brilliant story, loved it loads. I look forward to the next ones indeedy.

a good chapter im looking forward to more