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| Me 2008-08-21 ch 10, anon. | abuseTypical Ray! Well I finished reading, and it was as brilliant as I expected it to be :) Keep up this brilliant work. Love your big sister, Alice xx |
| Me 2008-08-21 ch 9, anon. | abuseWell, that definitely was NOT a 'pail of **' :P Btw, loved the nineties phone references :P |
| Me 2008-08-21 ch 8, anon. | abuseHoly Shizer! They thought 'wayhey, its safe now' and then wam, bam, the angry man is back in their lives. Poor them! |
| Me 2008-08-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseRay's attitude amuses me. "who paints over the fire escape...kidnappers who want you to burn to death!' LOVED IT! |
| Me 2008-08-21 ch 6, anon. | abuseI know I have read this before... It's brilliant :) |
| vic32 2008-06-09 ch 10, | abuseAh nice ending thank you for posting. Gezz even still in hopital Fraser wants to go back to work gosh almighty. |
| vic32 2008-03-21 ch 9, | abusevery good please finish |
| vic32 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abusegreat story |
| Niente Zero 2007-11-17 ch 9, | abuseSo happy to see another chapter up. Your Ray is excellent! -"In Fraser-speak that means get me a damn doctor, " Ray interrupted slightly, walking into the room, "Did you think I was going to wait in the waiting room like a good little detective?"- Lovely :) I liked Dewey having to have his say too. And I'm always happy to see Thatcher as more than just a damsel in distress - of course she'd elbow him. She's perfectly competent at playing with the big boys ;) Sorry to hear you've been ill! Feel better soon. |
| Alicat Sanders 2007-10-10 ch 7, | abuseThis one seems familiar to... Ah well you know I love it, and you, and your other fics. I re-read my reviews for your earlier work and omg I sounded like a right dip* I do apologize for my insaneness back then, I think it may have heightened and just matured a little. Pah who am I kidding. Love your work, write ME more. Yes I'm selfish. |
| Niente Zero 2007-09-26 ch 8, | abuseOh no! I just hate it when they go out of the frying pan, into the fire. Actually, you know I love it - more suspense, more drama, more intrigue. Hooray! Sorry to hear about the school drama. Whacky. |
| tucker 2007-09-19 ch 7, anon. | abusethings aren't looking too good for our fellas; hope to find the next chapter posted soon! good story |
| Alice 2007-09-17 ch 6, anon. | abuseI already read and reviewed this...I am pretty sure of it. ah I likes very much. Kill them both I say but then I do worry what you will do to me in the fics. If I lose a toe...then I know you dont like my idea. |
| Robin G. 2007-09-16 ch 7, anon. | abuse"Do we have a deal Mr. Scumbag?" - I love Ray's little Mr. Scumbag thing, lol. I'm guessing you liked the episode Good For the Soul too huh, lol. "What did I say about calling me 'the Yank'?" Ray muttered to Fraser's father, "Is it that hard to learn my name. Ray, come on, say it with me now... Ray." - I laughed so hard at that. Poor Ray getting all beaten like that by Mr. Scumbag (I know you beat Fraser more... but Ray's my fav.) I also love how Maggie's gun is NEVER loaded. She's like Fraser, lol. Again... please not too much on the Ray/Maggie shipper thing... If Ray get's Maggie... then I have absolutely no chance with him (Yes I know he's fictional... I don't care) Well anyways... please please please please please update soon. I'm waiting utterly impatiently and please don't burn my Ray-baby to death... I don't care about Fraser, just keep Ray alive! I beg you! |
| Niente Zero 2007-09-16 ch 7, | abuseYay! An update! Worth the wait. (I know. I'm impatient! Pfft!) Man... I don't blame Ray for almost giving the game away there. He's got no reason to be loyal to the real Ray Vecchio under the circumstances. Poor Frase isn't doing too hot, huh? I laughed out loud when Ray was yelling at Bob Fraser for calling him "the Yank." I like cliffhanger endings! |