Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Only Safe

HinataMorningstar
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abusethat was really good!!
The Lightning Flash
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuseOh, rats, only a oneshot? I know there's nothing worse than people nagging for a oneshot to be continued, but this would make an awesome multi-parter. I actually expected it to be a roadtrip-type fic when I read the summary (obviously not well enough *missed the oneshot bit*) and was therefore quite surprised when she made it safe and sound in one chap. ^^;

Still, a great little fic and I really enjoyed it. I quite like the 'lone warrior' type portrayal of Shino you had, as well, and imagine that without the support and friendship of people like Kiba and Hinata in a team situation he would be just as you portrayed him. A little world-weary, and a little too used to unpleasant things.

I'm half inclined to make a fanart of it. Well done. :)
wildcatt
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseOh, my. I immediately checked your page after reading that you were on an AU streak, and DUDE. I know I'm not half as eloquent as you are in your (very kind) reviews, but you have no idea how much I fangirled just by seeing that this was a ShinoHina! Unpopular it may be to the general fandom, but it's actually one of my favourites, and having you give it a shot...

I, for one, found Shino speaking in an old English style very sexy. (The idea of Kiba resembling a Celt is hardly disagreeable, either. In fact, I had a very pleasant mental image of him running across some wild moor, shirtless and tattoo-ed...you get the idea. XD) The combination of that, plus the slick action (having Shino jump onto Hinata's horse? Oh so smooth...) and the fact that you didn't end it with them getting together made me squirm in my chair like a...well, like a rabid fangirl, wanting more. I couldn't stop imagining how pretty Hinata must have looked in the snow, with her cheeks stained red and...love. Pure love.

I'll definitely be waiting for your future work for 50alternates! I'd give it a shot myself, but I'm not sure I have the stamina for it...and besides, you've already promised to dedicate much of it to Nejiten, so I'm definitely satisfied. XD
Return to Top