BEST... JET... DEATH FIC...EVER.

The first part was brilliant by naming the character after their attributes. ALso liked how you broke up the story with line,it really made me slow down and read instead of zipping through it like I ususally do. That last part... umph, right in the gut.

You and Vices are on my favorite list!

Very creative. I could tell who most of them were, but I didn't understand why Aang was frivolity.

I really like this story, the beginning part is my favorite because you didn't use names. I also like the very last part, it's very well written.