|Reviews for One Last Kiss|
| simplyjennxD 8/14/08 . chapter 1
Sora didn't die in vain but he died anyways TT_TT (right?)
Zesty! Please! You can leave the sad mushy depressing emo stories up to me, okay? Haha! I'm just kidding. :3
This one-shot was so cute! No lie! It was really depressing though...I wish Sora didn't have to die...then again, I'd be hypocritical since I'm gonna- oh oops. Nevermind. ;]
You know, you make such good SoKai fanfics, and yet you only made like one of them! (This one). And I'm not into gay, but I think with your writing skills you'll pull it off wonderfully. :)
| Kitten Kong 7/29/08 . chapter 1
Wow, that was very depressing.'( I love how you managed to get so much emotion in that story. ]
| crystalnami 6/1/08 . chapter 1
Oh, this was really good!
So sad, but inspiring! I loved it
Great job :3
| Wings of Water - SKYE 4/3/08 . chapter 1
I'm not even kidding, I could've SWORN i reviewed to this!
But oh well.
ANYWAYS, I think this has got to be the best one-shots I've ever read 'cuz I just generally don't like one-shots.
But this one was well written. The angst and tragedy was perfect!
I almost started crying! I don't deal well with tragedy.
Even when someone's dying Kairi and Sora always manage to be cute.
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A 1/9/08 . chapter 1
Poor Sora...or Kairi...I don't know who I feel worse for, actually. Probably both. OrgXI would never be THAT heartless (puns kind of intended), would they? Oh well. I really liked it. Great job!
| SorasKey 8/11/07 . chapter 1
Yeah, that was good, but sad. I guess it ended happy with the kiss, but Sora still died. Oh well. It was good and descriptive. Oh, and Axel's weapons are chakrams.
| Stormy Dreamer 8/7/07 . chapter 1
Well, I have to say I really enjoyed it for a story about a game that I've never played before XP It was beautifully written! Something about your writing style was a bit different in this story than your others but I can't really figure out what it was exactly... Maybe because it was in first person? I think the fact that the reader got to see into Sora's thoughts and feelings made it more dramatic and emotional. Good job!
And yes, I have about a million and one questions, but I'll PM them to you ]
| rolliepollie44 8/4/07 . chapter 1
Wow no way you must of been depressed! nah just jokin, u know me anyways that was really good totally was feeling how you grasped that inspiration and made it the best possible it could be.. also liked how ya did it in first person (i think or else thrid but back to the point!) very entertaining and totally worth reading! Sorry to ramble again u know me and my rambling ways! lol okay so yeah again extremely good story seems like you've been writing forever when really it's only your first!
| Red-Firaga 8/3/07 . chapter 1
wow that's really sad but it's good if you know what i mean..? i love all the discriptions you use! You'll be writing more things like this i hope!
| crazy-city-child 8/3/07 . chapter 1
Wow! That was amazing!