Great job coming up with Snape's potions lecture during the car ride. Nice logical info, that. ;)

Oh goodness. Its 3:17 in the morning and I have class at 9:30. But it seems that I cannot close my laptop and be done with this story. I should have gone to bed hours ago...I think I have reached a point where I will be able to go to bed. I will have lots of time to read this story after class. Thanks for keeping me riveted.

Well, I can't very well fall back on my old standard of saying how much I liked how you did something with Snape this time, eh? ;) Instead I'll mention how much I appreciate the detail you're putting in. Lots of plot, character interaction, motivation, etc.

I'm guessing that I'm going to have to find many more ways to say "I love how you're handling Snape in this story" or you might get bored of hearing it. ;) His thoughts on trying to figure out what to do now that he was set free is something that I hope will lead into more later.

Yay! More chapters to go. Lots more...

I'm quite enjoying your style of writing, especially your method of describing Snape and his actions. *quiet evil chuckle* Poor firsties.

Yay! I so like the "I will make notes and reason things out that way" method that Snape takes here. It works so well with his Advanced Potions book. The detail of his bending until his hair brushes the page was also lovely.

Well, the rest of the chapter was, also. ;)

I'm greatly enjoying this story thus far, and am happy to see there's lots more of it to read! I was quite touched by your backstory with Lily- you wrote that extremely well. *sniffles*

all i can say...is that this was AMAZING. it has completely touched my heart in every way. thank you so much!

hahaha your AN at the end had me rolling on the floor. It totally is a Darth Vader/Luke Skywalker type deal! I'm looking forward to spending quite a bit of time reading this fic =)

Brilliant... Simply brilliant

I was amazed at how your story affects me, I almost headbutted a wall, amazing I almost headbutted a wall.

I struggle to think of something that has been both so disappointing and mind numbingly boring.

Absobloodylutely amazing!! This is probably the best hermione and snape fanfiction I've ever read!! Their characters are perfect and amazing, and although I was unsure about hermione at first with her car drive with Severus I understand why it was like that. Ahh I hate Draco Malfoy. 7 years! I love Poppy as well, and Dudley was a good idea. I knew from when Neville said he loved somebody but they were already taken he fancied Hermione and I thought they were sweet together before Snape came properly into the picture. Just one more thing.. what are Snape's favourite biscuits? x

I enjoyed reading this story. It took a long time to get to the actual pairing of Hermione and Severus but really I suppose the whole story was about it.
Anyhow I enjoyed it and definitely a story for my favorites list.

Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.

Draco Malfoy at the station - that was a bit weird. Even more strange that they nodded at each other for greeting. Feels wrong.
I can understand that you didn't want to kick him out of the epilogue as you tried to wrap up the story as J.K. Rowling did.

But would you acknowledge someone who raped you and tried to kill your friends and professors?
And the ending "All's well, my love," is a bit flat for my taste. I'm not sure how I would have written it though.

Despite these two minor points I do love your story. Love, romance, mystery - you got it right. Having read the story Falling Further In I noticed the similiarities between these stories. But I don't blame you for them as you managed to write a unique story.

I'm not sure what more I could say, not right now. I'll have to reread this story and then I might be better abled to review it.