 MizJoely 8/27/09 . chapter 3Not boring, this chapter. This is one of the better post-Labyrinth fanfics I've read, and as you can tell, I'm working my way up to the most recent. Great job so far. |
 Yume Lynne-Chan 1/10/05 . chapter 4Wow... this story's getting good! Keep writing! _ |
 Unseen Watcher 4/19/04 . chapter 4 *pouts* no fair! . . .*grin* |
 Bonnie S 10/18/02 . chapter 4Oh please continue!
This is getting better than many of the fics I read! And I promise it is better than my own! |
 Serena 5/1/02 . chapter 4 You guys have to stop leaving your stories at such heartstopping moments! It annoys the hell out of me! (grins). |
 heartnut 11/4/01 . chapter 4totally awesome story! Thank you! Keep going, though! I want to read the rest! |
 Anne-Marie 10/10/01 . chapter 4good plot, it was getting a bit dragged down at the end, could just be my sleep deprivation kicking in though...anyhow, please finish! I like the Toby and Karen interaction w/Sarah that is going on :) very good! |
 Elisabeth 9/16/01 . chapter 4 excellent...so good...when is the next part going to be finished? |
 Rena 9/8/01 . chapter 4 This kicks arse! _ Please indulge us with some more soon, okay? I'll be waiting!
Rena |
 Fairy 9/3/01 . chapter 4This is sooooo great so far! I'm enjoying every moment of it! I can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Xelena 8/27/01 . chapter 4oooo, please write more soon. i like where this is going. |
 Laurie LabyLoverLaurie 8/26/01 . chapter 4 I can't wait to read the next chapters, this story is wonderful! I'm waiting breathlessly!
-Laurie |
 cutiechelsey 8/26/01 . chapter 4Oooh, I am quite liking this! Post more, pretty please? Is Toby gonna wish Sarah away? I'm dying to read more of your excellent writing. |
 minako233 8/24/01 . chapter 4wow! keep on writing please! |
 Jasper 8/24/01 . chapter 4 ohhh...moremoremoremore...please ? |