| Reviews for Until Somebody Loses |
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R-dude 3/12/13 . chapter 13I thing that if you tried really, really hard, you could have come up with a worse way to resolve things than you did. Well, not that you resolved anything. I understand that you wrote yourself into a corner, but you could have at least tried. |
R-dude 3/12/13 . chapter 10I know its been a long time, but there is something I must say. For having admitted that Batman is the greatest detective in the world, you have him acting quite stupid. Whenever she talks to him, Diana makes zero effort to hide that she knows, yet Batman remains conveniently oblivious. If your plot requires Batman to not be Batman, something is wrong. |
CloudyDream 2/22/13 . chapter 14I liked this. I'd have loved a sequel, but I enjoyed the story all the same. |
Guest 1/26/13 . chapter 1 Hey, at least you kept Bats in character. Thunder |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 14I once saw in one of your disclaimers that you are not making any money out of this! My question is why not? With skills such as yours you can easily be a bestselling author! Anyway just wanted to say i am glad i found this story, it seems you are inactive, but still I sincerely thank you for giving us this wonderful piece of fiction! |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 12Keeps me on the edge, btw i apologize for coming across this story so late but I did leave my reviews, i hope it still means something! |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 11Beautiful story development, it appears that u have everything under control! |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 10I am amazed at how appropriate this story is, everything is happening as it should nothing is farfetched, infos and secrets are being revealed in a proper way, i am really enjoying this! |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 9U did your research, nice story, great analogies! |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 8Upsetting to see Diana melt so easily, then again she is in love so i guess this happens! |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 7You dont get to see anyone too ahead of Batman for long, but when its Diana its actually refreshing! |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 3Its brilliant how you draw Bruce and Batman together, really educational! |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 2The game begins, beautiful piece of writing! |
FeelingMyself 11/4/12 . chapter 1She does need help if she wants to achieve that! |
Ni Castle 7/30/12 . chapter 14story very well written. Unlike what I've read, I loved it. The ending was wonderful |