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Zaxara
2010-01-06 . chapter 6
Great story, I always wondered how Naruto would be if he were like Gaara.
harveyiar
2009-12-29 . chapter 6
This is a very well written story and over all, I like it. But this has to be one of the most saddest I have ever read.
Death's fear
2009-12-15 . chapter 1
I like how insane Naruto is in this.
Antioch XX
2009-12-13 . chapter 6
wow Naruto is nuts, great story though
Amon Kashino
2009-12-12 . chapter 6
OMG! I just fell in love with this story. I was aimlessly searching through the random Naruto drabble when i came across this gem. The way the story is written just draws me in and i can't wait to see what happens next. Very, very good job, I can't wait to see more.
~Tokijin of Asura Server (FFXI)
alphabetagemini400
2009-11-15 . chapter 6
great story
KitsuneOverlord
2009-11-13 . chapter 6
Your fic probably incorporates the most terrifying and realistic Monster!Naruto I've ever come across in all my days of fanfic reading. I'm starting to think of him as a murderous psychopath that's pretty darn close to the level of Hannibal Lecter or Jack the Ripper (the *historical* one, who turned his final victim into a mess of gore, not the romanticized loser that came later...*), just a lot more childish.

Too bad about Tsunami dying. That was a bit depressing... Something about Tazuna complaining about her death almost had me believing Naruto would pull some scary rise-from-ashes resurrection stunt by impaling her through the hear, setting her on fire and then forcibly regenerate and leave her alive, but with a horrible scar over her chest.

Still... Naruto going all "Finish the bridge or I'll kill you all in the most horrible and fiery manner I can think of" was pretty awesome, too. Definitely freaky enough to impress even the latest incarnation of the Joker.

Keep up the good work!
dongaro
2009-11-01 . chapter 6
Godly and amazing story and writing style. It was unique and really well written. I was originally leery of a fem Gaara but this was really good. I like how both Gaara and Naruto are shown. Though I do hope Naruto changes and recovers his sanity. Or even a better a pairing of some kind. But regardless I look forward to reading this story because it is so well done.
Hat O' Doom
2009-10-30 . chapter 6
Hm, I guess he is right. Kinda hard to believe that despite everything the mission would still be a success. I guess what it comes down to is just some bad PR. I like your story by the way. Puts a new spin on things. I mean they are still ninjas after all and death and all that nastiness is part of the resume.
TheRealJerk
2009-10-23 . chapter 6
This is not a tragedy/angst fic. This is a horror fic. Its just plain disturbing.
I see no light at the end of this tunnel.
Gogolu
2009-10-17 . chapter 6
Impressive story.
Cylon One
2009-10-16 . chapter 6
Excellent as always.
Glad to see this update.
Was afraid it never would.
The Last Rising Of The Phoenix
2009-10-10 . chapter 6
Ok Your story is nice but the mentality of Naruto seems to be that of a child why? I know that the Kyuubi messed with his psyche but even though he should be a little more mature. Anouther thing don't you think the Hokage would have tried to stop him from becoming like this especially after the Uchiha massacre. So update soon even if your story is about a insane Naruto it still awesome.
ranma hibiki
2009-10-09 . chapter 6
good fight..but tsunami being caught an being brought to the bridge
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well everything from then on became morbid. like watching a zombie about to eat someone, you just cant turn away but you know wont be pleasnt ta watch

gave naruto some char. though, shows how much he only cares for himself an "the real iruka"
konnichi1wa
2009-10-09 . chapter 6
It has been quite a while since I found a halfway decent fic in all the piles of mediocrity on this site, and even longer since a good story had a crazy naruto and a female gaara that didn't just degenerate into a bunch of plotless lemons.

On this note, keep up the great work, congrats on finishing the wave arc, since many authors seem to have trouble with it, and I can't wait until the next chapter comes out.
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