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| Kaleena1247 2008-07-09 ch 1,  | abuseum i got a little confused on who was doing what ..but it was a nice lemon and ...good job..just tell the reader more often who is doing what ..cause agian it was a little confusing.. but agian good job.. |
| Lamanth 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI loved this fic the first time I read it on ages agao and I was so pleased to find it again after all this time. Luv Lamb |
| TarynCasey 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseWow a team 8 fic. I had never read one before so either I have really been missing out or you can write. |
| FirestormAngelBlaze 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abusea menage a trois. wow. don't know whether to be disgusted or turned on. i kinda prefer to leave Shino out (sorry) but you made it work somehow. like you said, teamwork. how fitting, an excuse for such an activity. i don't like how she's constantly pining after Naruto either so i'll be glad if these two make her forget him. Ja Ne! :D :) FirestormAngelBlaze |
| mariaha 2007-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abusewow. hot. is there more? |
| Tsume 2007-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI keep saying this... I LOVE HinataxShinoxKiba stories. My recomandation (not to be rude but ul probaly think i am) More detain (god i feel like my english teacher *shiver*) like hake the actual sex part longer. anyway good luck! |
| KibaxHinataIsMyAnti-Drug 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseLoved the story thus far but one suggestion for your next threesome story involving Kiba and Hinata, KIBA IS THE ONE WHO IS SUPPOSED TO TAKE HINATA'S VIRGINITY, not Shino or anybody else, especially not Naruto, because despite what Naruto said during the prelims, Kiba is the top dog around HERE. Other than that, good lemon and hope you update soon. |
| Zuriyan 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abusePure gorgeousness my dear. This was amazingly good. I liked the gentle description, and yes, more would be good, but you kept well within the R-rating. Loved it.. it was quite evocative. A very good interperetation of the three characters, love it. |
| 1moonwitch 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abusevery hot story.love this threesome.they are great pairing.i lookforward to reading more of your work. moonwitch |
| LightningFuryStrike13 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful |
| dustori 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I read this on Adultfanfiction and I love the story. I think I reviewed it under a different name there (DownTownWoman) but if I haven't I will. Team 8 are so cute and I think the shiest (if that's even a word) group from Naruto. To read a story with them with lemon in it is very rare and hard to find. It seems only when there are stories with yuri or yaoi in them is where you'll most likely see them or one of them in there, but as a team is rare. I'm really a KibaHinata fan and I love the little moments you had with them in your story. They really deserve each other. Anyway, great story and I can't wait to see what else you'll have with them or one of them or you know, a KibaHinata one (wink wink). I just love it. Dustori aka DownTownWoman on AFF |
| PersianLady 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseWOOHOO! THREESOME!! I definitly love it! xD |