LMAO The two backed beast of... Oh my god. You rock! XD I laughed so hard. And Word calling himself "Mummy"... Yes... XD

Wow.

God, I'm out of my depth here.

I love it. The crow-drag the whole way through is just hilarious and your use of sarcasm with both Sentrus and practically everyone else is really entertaining.

You have a really good dry writing style that a lot of stories don't have and its great to read.

I don't think much else can actually be said, except for keep writing, god you're good at it.

Wait, I'll try and be helpful. It was nice that you referred to ancient dragon days, and the completely new bit of story is really interesting.

This was hilarious. I lol'd so hard. You know what they say about people that live in glass houses...

...get curtains.

Because there was artha/moordryd in this, it goes in the C2! Huzzah! More A/M!

...Wow. This is so weird, and so funny...I should have known he's do something with the crow-drag...