Hallo Leliha,

beim ersten Kapitel dachte ich ja zuerst:
'Huch, jetzt taucht doch hoffentlich keine unbekannte Zwillingsschwester/Cousine/sonstwas von Lilly Evans auf'.
Aber das war dann merlinseidank nicht der Fall.

Das Ganze dann dem neugierig gewordenen Potter im Rückblick zu schildern, fand ich spannend, denn man konnte bis zum Schluss spekulieren, ob Snape überlebt hat.

Auch fand ich die Beziehung zwischen Rose und Severus schön beschrieben. Du hast nichts überstürzt und glaubhaft rübergebracht, wie Snape trotz oder vielleicht sogar wegen des Drucks, der auf ihm lastete, hier so etwas wie einen sicheren Hafen fand.

Ich finde beide Enden der Story gelungen. Sogar das erste Ende hat etwas Tröstliches, auch wenn es kein Happy End ist.

LG

Irm

Excellent! I am so glad! I like happy endings.

Not so much Canon here as David would have been entered on the Rolls at Hogwart's when he was born or at least when he performed his first 'accidental magic'.

I do like the story though. Now on the the other choice.

How nice of you!

I am glad for Severus! I really am!

Just whose child do you think she put on the train, Harry?

Severus certainly needed someone who wouldn't judge him.

You are really dragging this one out! ARRGGHH!!

Excellent story though. I really like the plot bunny.

Very interesting! :)

Excellent start! Very mysterious!

Oh, that's a sweet tale! Both endings are apt.

The sad ending is convincing. The other ending is good as well, but I can't help it - Snape died there at the shrieking shack, it was very sad and brutal, and yet it is the only ending for Snape that is real for me now. :(
However - great story! :)

I just saw this story for the first time and quite enjoyed it. I really don't think long complicated explanations are needed for Snape to live through DH. After all, only 3 teenagers saw him "die" and their only assessment was based on his eyes going blank and the fact that there was lots of blood. But having seen just 1 pint of blood spilled from a plasma bag onto the floor, it wouldn't really take a huge amount of blood loss to make the inexperienced assume somebody has bled to death.

I do like your OC, as well, and her meeting with Harry was a good format to use for telling the story.

I absolutely loved your story! You really created a multi-layered original character that was extremely believable. And I loved your portrayal of Snape...he was very much in character, especially now that we have those memories he gave Harry. Bravo...I really enjoyed your story!

Great happy ending! :o) From the point of storytelling, I prefer your sad ending, as it fits in the the overall story, even as a part of canon, so much better. But as someone who loves Severus Snape dearly *g*, I much prefer this ending, even if he wears Gryffindor ties now - great pun, by the way! *giggle*.
This ending is very well done, too, and I like it all the same. It's great how you let join Snape in the discussion at some point, and it's nice, of course, that he was able to make himself such a good place in the muggle world. It fits his personality so well: when it's worth fighting for or putting effort into, he does and succeeds...
Thank you very much for this beautiful story.