Hey good job keep it up. ^-^

hmm maybe they were after Dragon. Or Sir Theodore

Deep stuff at the end. One question, however, a dream or a possible warning?
Waiting for more!

This is one of the best JatD fanfictions, I swear. I really doubt it, but will you be continuing this story? It's been well over a year since you published the first chapter.

thank you so much for posting this story! it's pretty good so far! and, i don't mean to annoy you or anything,but, are you still continuing this story? if you have writer's block i understand,but, it's been a year since you posted the first chapter...

I like it! When are you updating?

... you have not updated since august... that's really just horrible. When you start something, finish it.

Very Good! When's the next chapter coming up? Don't leave me hanging here!

Please put more up,I really want to know what happens!

I'm lovin' it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I think it's a great start. I love the parts with Jane and Dragon. ^^

I love this show! I watch when I can and I think it's so cute! I always thought that Jane and Jester should get together.

hey! let me just say this chapter kicks butt. but u already know that or else u wouldn't of put it up right? this is definitly going to have mad reviews from loads of people. i mean u've already got 5 reviews for the 1st chapter. tell me that isn't awesome! The story line is amazing for only the first chapter, the dialogue is great, and the character/setting detail is just incredible. can't wait till more chapters come!





(FOR ALL THOSE WHO ARE READING THESE REVIEWS< DON"T FORGET TO CHECK OUT xOblueeyesOx's OTHER STORY: THE KEY TO HIS LIGHT )

awesome start! this story looks promising. Please update soon!

i like this, i do i do i do. Nice length chapter in the begining, loved the bit about the bucket. keep it going! well done