I love this! It is truly wonderful!!

That was hott...very OOC, but still hott haha xD Cant wait for part two, good luck writing it!

Uh-oh, somebody caught the brothers doing the naughty-naughty. *evil laughter* I wonder who it was? Alexis? Or maybe Juli? Hm, blackmail... Anyway, poor Riff! He's got to leave his new wife to go to work! And with Cain on the loose, who can deny his devilish charm. Urgh... must read... part two...

Wo0t, Riff got married and it's a happy ending... right? Hm... Cain does't like Juli, wonder why? *evil laughter* And Cain and Jizabel go at it again, hm, wonder how long they can keep THAT up. *more evil laughter* Okay, I'm done now.

Uh-oh. Who could be calling? Again, YAY! RIFF'S GONNA GET MARRIED... or is he? again with the plot twists... I've come to expect them these days... Hm, Cain is a little horny teenager! He's younger than me and getting more action! I feel depressed now... I have to go eat donuts and get fat... *eats donuts while sobbing into a milk bottle*

YAY! ...Cain's a really dirty person, isn't he? ... 0.o I just realized this about two seconds ago... Eek... Anyway, yay! RIFF'S GONNA GET MARRIED! ...or is he? ... hm... plot twists... I forgot all about them.

... Cain is just like his father, Alexis... they're both play-boys... DOESN'T THAT BREAK YOUR HEART? ... I'm kidding (I think). Nice chapter, loved it, especially the Jizabel and Cain part.

o.0 That was... AWESOME! People like you need to write more of these fics! There's just not enough of them! I'll leave my criticising alone for this time since I'm am pleased. The Yaoi Goddess is pleased, MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ...ignore that last comment...

o.0 That was... weird... My only question is, have you ever read the manga? I'm not trying to be mean, it's just that this is kinda... awkward for me. I love the fact that Riff is a family man and that Cain has a sense of humor, but wasn't Cain mortally terrified of his father when he was a child? Anyway, loved it.

Meow! =3

Thank you!! Im sad that this is going to end soon. T.T But I loved it all the same..and yes it was very interesting!! I love this story and even when its over I'll re-read it..because I'm cool like that!!

Uh-oh...who could have been peeking? Sneaky pervert! XD I don't suppose I should be saying anything since I'm reading lemons and such. XD Update soon!

Just wanted to let you know..."I need you right here,right now" is actually"J'ai besoin de toi ici et maintenant" and "A-ah!Jisabel,please touch me" is "A-ah!Jisabel, touchez-moi je vous prie"

Aw, tis okey, we'll wait. C:

Ok thanks you for the heads up!! aw man i cant wait...anyway thanks for the notice..see ya later!