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| CatCrazy5 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseThank you for this enjoyable story. I liked all the hurt/comfort, especially with Heyes on the hurt end, since he has always been my favorite character in this fandom. |
| Elleree 2007-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this story. I think you portrayed the boys--Heyes and Curry--just right. You really captured their relationship. Moreover, this was a well-written piece. All of the secondary characters were realistic, though perhaps Mr. Wade could have been fleshed out a bit more. (But anyone would seem a little flat compared to Evelyn. =)) The parts about the flood were really moving and heartfelt; this was a good triubute to the people who have suffered a flood. Thank you for writing this excellent story; I hope to read more Alias Smith and Jones fan fictions by you in the future. :D |
| smokestack1942 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseReally Enjoyed this! And being from Oklahoma I thank you. |
| Penny 2007-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice! Wonderful characterizations, and I enjoyed the complication of Joe Martin. I've really enjoyed your stories; thanks! |
| TAB 2007-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is an excellent story. You have the characters down pat. You describe things beautifully. Perfect balance of h/c and of Heyes & Curry. I can't wait to read more of your work. Thanks for writing. |
| CJ 2007-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally enjoyed the humor mixed into this hurt/comfort story. Your Joe Martin and Mr. and Mrs. Wade felt so real and alive when I read this, especially the Wades. Very nice story. You also really brought out the depth of caring and understanding between Curry and Heyes. Liked this a lot! |
| Zoe Heyes 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseOne thing I don't like about most hurt/comfort stories is that they don't have a good character balance. With Heyes and Kid the relationship between them is the most important thing. You're hurt/comfort story was different. Even though Heyes was hurt, you were able to maintain that balance and relationship. Excellant job. I hope to see more from you. |
| mlwall 2007-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseEnjoyed this very much. I enjoy hurt/comfort stories. And this was well written. Kept both the characters strong throu out hte story. Hope to see more soon. |