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| daisy07 2008-08-08 ch 16,  | abuseI have just read this story in one sitting and have loved every moment of it. I really hope you will be finishing it. Your characterization is spot on and you have a very readable and accomplished style. This latest chapter is so wonderfully descriptive and I could really feel all of Booth's pain. I congratulate you on your talent. Thank you. |
| Anonymous 2008-04-14 ch 16, anon. | abusehi, this is one of my favorite bones stories. it's very well written and true to character. please update or maybe leave an authors note if u dont plan to continue this story? thanks! for my sake i hope u plan to finish! |
| saragillie 2007-11-20 ch 16, | abuseI just found this story and it's very good. I'm so glad that Booth isn't dead, but please tell us what happens next. :-) |
| marteloise 2007-10-29 ch 16, | abuseI've discovered this fic and I really like how you write!! Did Bones really find him or is it just a dream due to a fever. If it's real, how did she find him? I can't wait to read more! Thanks for writing! |
| bb-4ever 2007-10-29 ch 16, | abusewow she's found him, he's alive. will he be ok? look forward to more soon |
| ReticentWriter 2007-10-29 ch 16, | abuseDear Scarlet, Your story is driving me crazy with angsty excitement. Please update soon. Love Becca PS -- ::pulls hair out:: I'm trying not to be emotional. Did it work? |
| TemperTemper 2007-10-29 ch 16, | abuseWow, loved the imagery from within his mind, makes great sense that he would think he was in hell. And Brennan is there for him! Can't wait to read more, this story has me so hooked! TT x |
| DeanParker 2007-10-28 ch 16, | abusebooth is too stubborn for his own good... |
| mecedeme 2007-10-28 ch 16, | abuseAgh! So which one is real, which one is fantasy?? And by the way, I read your first paragraph and I was drooling. I wish I could write a beautiful descriptive paragraph like that. You're brilliant! |
| ForRomance 2007-10-28 ch 16, | abuseAGH! Don't leave us hanging! So good, I love the time lapse-ish thing and Brennan taking care of Booth... totally need to know what happened though! Waiting with bated breath... |
| spacekid77 2007-10-28 ch 16, | abuseI could have sworn I'd reviewed this story before - so sorry for that! Can't wait to see how you finish this one... so intense! Great line: "You need me and I’m not going anywhere until you don’t need me anymore.” So I guess she's not going anywhere, right? We all know he needs her more than his next breath! Love it - please continue soon! Sonya |
| danireed 2007-10-28 ch 16, | abusegreat chapter your doing a good job |
| mendenbar 2007-10-28 ch 16, | abuseInclined to review? Hm, well I usually sit up to do so but I will give it a try. Sthisj ejs thhe ghie so thit ahsil. No, I don't think that will work very well. Back to sitting up.Brennan is just a figment of Booth's imagination in this chapter (I hope) otherwise it doesn't flow from the rest of the story. Fever dreams, however, are always allowed to be disjointed. BTW, WHERE is Booth? And beyond the GSW, what is wrong with him? Yes, if Musie comes home with what she left with, that is considered winning, or at least not losing. |
| mecedeme 2007-10-23 ch 15, | abuseI have to confess, I wanted to find out what happened so badly that I skipped a lot on my way through, desperate speed-reading to figure out the problem. I believed it was Booth's body! Great work! Now update, quick like. |
| Temperance-is -a -virtue 2007-10-23 ch 9, | abusethis is a good story. you scared me with the pregnancy thing. i have to go home now my mom is probably worried. i'll read the rest of this tomorow. |