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| Yemam2422 2007-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this! Very sweet and I like the depth you gave to Lindsay's feelings. It was a nice counterbalance to the fun and games of Yahtzee. "their current state was definitely more shifting sands than sturdy rock" - lovely phrasing. "You ain’t seen Yahtzee yet.” - perfect ending line! |
| Layla2 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseGreat stuff, as always-- excellent characterization... and- "She could handle it when it came from Flack because a well placed whack to the back of his head was an easy way to combat any snark he threw their way." ROFL! Perfect-- just perfect. That is just so fitting to Flack... I love it. |
| notesofwimsey 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abusel always like the interaction you write between the characters - you have a great since of the flow and rhythm of conversation. Nice little addition to a great series. |
| JESSMARY25 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseI love your series, I love your work in general!! |
| daytimedrama 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseLoved it!! Very fun! I'm especially loving these fics now that Danny and Lindsay are together! |