Ohhh... I can't stop wondering what will Mary think if she finally know that her real parents is Dean and Hilly!?

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Oh, and I can't stop myself to say Mary's name as 'Samantha'! XDD lol sorry

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Sam was smart to notice that fast! Normal people will think that more than twice before said that bluntly!

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Ah, I actually laugh when Dean told Sam how angry Hilly was at John and when John shortly said "sorry" to Dean and then hung up! NICE!

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Good fic! Fun read! ;)

Good. I always figured Dean would have a kid out there somewhere. Like the adpotion twist you put in and showed his paternal side without making it sappy. Keep up the great writing. Im a major fan now :)

I hope you plan to do a sequel! Please?

Oh gosh- so sweet!

Cute story. I think Dean would have made a good dad, but it was a great fanfiction. Good job!

Thanks so much for the great story and your wonderful off!

Hilly is a great character, the idea of a tough girl, female version of Dean is fascinating. ;) I will not pretend that their shared past and little Mary weren't surprising for me, but after a while I got used to the idea. And I liked it even more when Hilly proved herself to be a good friend of Sam and Dean. It would be nice to see something like that in the show. It would be nice to see Sam and Dean somewhere feeling comfy and accepted. That is why I loved the idea of the Roadhouse and I regret that Mr. Kripke has decided to burn it... :/ I have read in an interview that he didn't like the idea of boys having anything close to home... What a waste! :/

I know that you have already written 2 other stories with Hilly, the last one had a very specific ending and I hope Hilly will appear in your future stories...

aww! I really liked this story! :D I could see it all bein played out in my head which is normally a sign of a very well written story :D

nice job!

aw! I really like this story! it's very cute! :D

and I LOVE the fact that Mary is Dean's daughter...I had a feeling from the beginning... :)

I kinda like the idea of Dean bein a daddy, kinda like he wanted to be with Ben...I think he'd be a good dad :)

'“Dean…” He was at a loss for words. His brother drove him stark staring nuts sometimes.' ROFL :D - I can just see Sammy' bitch face here :D - I love that Milly has insurance cards for the boys :D - and what a wonderful ending, bitter sweet. I really like Milly and Mary, and I like the way you handled the subject matter, very true to the storyline :D - my heart breaks for Dean 'cause I can imagine how hard it must be for him to leave his other family behind. Beautiful stuff bud (blows nose)

Hugs and luv

Mish :D

Aw, panicky Sammy and Milly YAY :D - I love how Dean's injuries affected Sammy and how Dean is always checking to see if his little brother is alright. Beautiful :D - I may be grinning stupidly right now, you'll never know LOL :D

“Bite me.” “Not in front of Sam.” ROFL :D - totally loving the banter between Milly and Dean :D - and now you've hurt Dean :D - Iza love you LOL :D

OMG Muffy LOL :D - it's so amazing how this story is running almost parallel to what was happening with John and Adam. You clever thing you, you were reading Kripke's mind ... admit it ROFL :D - I'm usually not a big fan of Dean being a father, but this story is so endearing, and feels so plausible, I'm totally loving it :D

Lovely first chapter, I really like Milly and little Mary :D - I'm already worried that Mary is Dean's kid, biting my nails as I go onto chapter 2 LOL :D

Hugs and luv

Mish :D

I have to say, I normally don't like stories that have OFCs/romance, and especially not when Dean has a child out there somewhere. It just makes me so sad for him that he doesn't get to be a dad to them. But I found this story oddly compelling, despite that. Hilly was an interesting character. I'm glad Dean got to have a small part in Mary's life, and I love that you named her that!