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| weatherwitch.X.x.X. 2008-10-01 ch 1, | abusecool! i never did think about charlies pov. you did it really well! |
| Sarquan 2008-08-02 ch 1, | abuseits nice to see charlies point of view for a change! you did a very interesting and detailed character development on him and it is realistic (as realistic as a story about vampires and werewolves can be). keep up the good work! -simone |
| septentrion 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseOh, I so enjoy canon scenes from another POV, especially when they're so well written. |
| Jhu Radcliffe 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseOEIHOIEHOEHOIEHIO Charlie is love! Great fanfic |
| FallenMystery 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI love you more than I can explain. You capture all of the characters exceptionally well (Charlie's always been a soft spot of mine). Also, the line "I SEE HIS CAR AND I KNOW YOU'RE OUT THERE!" is one of my favorites. It's just kind of silly in a 'you can't hide from me because i see your feet sticking out from under the bed' sort of way. FM |
| Sporkface 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this |
| silly bj 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseNot one of my favs, but then again Charlie isn't one of my favorite characters. Please keep writing. |
| LuvAtFirstBite 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI'd like to see bullets hurt a block of (perfect) granite. ;} (that's a smirky face) |
| EdwardCullensGirl09 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I've never read fanifiction from Charlie's POV. Very good. I'm sure it must have taken you a while to write this, I know I'd have trouble writing anything that wasn't from Bella's mind. Great job, I enjoyed it. |
| HeswamtoFrance 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseWow never would have thought to do Charlie's view on all this, but now it makes totally sense, i think. great story, love it! george |
| Moonpetal Lily 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI love how you got so deeply into Charlie's mind. And then, at the end, connecting it to the end of New Moon, put it into context of Twilight perfectly. |
| i.love.oreos 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseEEK! woiw. poor Charlie. its so hard for him. :'[ i really liked it though :] |
| chica-chilena 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, I love it when people write other people's POV. It just makes me understand the smaller characters so much more. Great job on this one! :D |
| apocalypse cabaret 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseman, when you oneshot it up, you really oneshot it up. You're making me look bad with this whole.. updating thing. hahaha. |
| freakyClaudia 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseAw, I loved that! Poor Charlie. He really is just trying to do his best. Awesome job! :D |