Wow, emotional moment for Charlie, huh?
You write really well, though :)

OMFG this was like so so good, ur one of the best fanfic writters I've ever read, even better than like some publicshed writters I've ever read! well done x

Charlie is actually pretty scary at the end of NM.

I love it!!
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This is fabulous, with just a hint of humor and plenty of lovely parts. It's very believable. Well done.

Aw, poor Charlie. Somehow I like him just a little more. hehe

nice

I really, really enjoyed reading Charlie's POV on this. I think you did a great job getting inside his head.

I didn't read this, yet, but I will, soon. I know, exactlly, what Charlie, will say.

He is SO, nosey, with, Edward, and Bella's relationship.

I wonder, what he'd be like, and his responses, if he knew, about, Edward, and, his family.

But, I will message you, and tell you, what I think, of it. Soon. :)!!

I liked this a lot! It's very true to Charlie's character.

Another good Charlie fic. You're having him get to conclusions that aren't right, but are reasonably close. I think you've got the balance pretty good.

That was a lot of fun, reading from Charlie's POV. Charlie is so withdrawn but loves Bella very much and you captured his thoughts just right! I enjoyed the parts about Renee being angry with him and his thoughts about Edward too.

Ha ha very good job i was laughing almost the whole time ( at the funny parts< like at the end when they was in da car
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I liked the whole idea of it, but i just feel that in one one-shot, he told himself that he was a cop a lot of times, it was just a little much.. I don't know what I'm saying! Anyway good luck writing and whatever else. O and I like the way you ended it!

This is a great fic! The writing is amazing and you really get into his head.

Plus, I love his little yelling fit at the end, in both the book and here. It's funnier here :)