lol that was awesome and hilarious at the same time... good job :D

wow that was a surpise!! really it hit me like a pinch on the butt! but it was good

-Aw- at the ending.

YES! lol never EVER even thought of this parining! but you did it.. yes... yes u did *i wonder if sai read what he did in a book sex for dummies!* haha that was awesomeness!

...Don't talk to me. DON'T. Because if you DID I would, cry at your AWESOMENESS.
-stuck on da oder syde,
Lissa-chan :I

OMFG nose bleed so HOT H-O-T HOT WHOHO and I know this is a one shot but please do another part to this... SaiHina 4EVER!

Exceptionally Erotic With A Sweet After-Taste.

This Is,Undoubtedly,One Of My Favorites. ^_^

M
Delicious.
Sai is such a cutie and Hinata so innocent, its good to have someone as bold as sai to get her into the mood haha.

whoo! that was HAWT! good fic!

Damn, you made Sai seem so, so very hot! Hinata...well I wouldn't have seen it coming but it was great! Awesome fic!
More please!

OMFG, Seriously they aren't enough SaixHinata stories.
I love this so much, it's going into my forever collection.
Maybe this souldn't be just one chapter, like maybe another one called the morning after or something.
I am quite a sad liitle girl, becuase I love the M stories and theres only one complete one.
So people should write more.

Anyway is there any chance that there will be a sequal to this sotory??

Take care
xoxoxo

i need a tissue (has a mega nosebleed) uh... wow who knew hinata had it in her uh... really lost for words (still having a nosebleed) um i would never have thought of that paring wow

i liked it,
it was original because i wouldnt have thought of this pairing.
and hinita doesnt seem to have been doing it forever, the whole thing was estinctal which was driven by her drunkeness.
your skills in writing are amazing and the idea of this one shot was unique.

pinkitten90

Ah *inhales* nothing like god crack pairings! THIS FANFICTION ROX! I'mma add this 2 my favorites! Might as well add you 2 my fave author's list, 2! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

::buys you a CRATE of sake bottles for such a kickass oneshot::

Wonderful WONDERFUL job with the characterizations! ...It's so refreshing to read some NON Sasuke/Naruto/Sakura centered adult material. Sai Hinata? ...damn. Hahaha, again great job! ::Buys you another crate of sake bottles just for the hell of it::