so glad you chose Jeff over Dave.

I like Dave a lot, but for her age, Jeff is definitely

a better match. And, they can do and enjoy things together

a lot more naturally.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

aw seems like laura and the rest had a good time!

I love it. Would be great to read about someone punching Orton though. Anyway the update was great.

I love that. I gotta admit I want to see what happens with Randy.

I love the thing with Randy. The whole thing about her giving him a good 'ol Stone Cold salute was great. I really wanna see more with that.

I'm not sure what I think of this. It seems generally like a well written story in the sense that you can write decent, but then you have a cool teenager, how keeps saying father which sounds awfully stiff, weird use of the word bitch and you're actually implying that a teenage girl would be send out to beat up a full grown man. That's... really stupid.

I'm not sure I'll be going any futher with this one.

Coolness woman. I really like the story.

loving this series

Aw how Cute!

i liked this chapter what is up with shawn and hunter do they get love or are they in love already?

Love the story. Can't wait for the 20 questions.

Laura telling off Randy and masters was great. I think her partner should be Jeff cause he's awesome.

Great story so far! It's got to be Jeff as her partnet X3

Keep up the good work!

I love this story so far and I pick Jeff to be her partner.

AWESOME! I think her partner should be Jeff! This story is really good! It's not often yuo see a Jeff/oc story. I really like this. I will definately keep reading.