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| anon 2008-06-18 ch 6, anon. | abuseHi, I've noticed you write a lot of Nadia/Doyle (very well I might add). Did you watch the first four seasons of 24? If you haven't, you should watch the DVDs ASAP, because I think you'd be an excellent Tony/Michelle writer. Michelle is a lot like Nadia, only more developed. And somewhat more badass. |
| Lady Celestia17 2007-09-01 ch 6,  | abuseI don't usually like stories with OCs, but the is very well written. Good job! |
| 24isthebest 2007-08-22 ch 6, | abuseI am SO sorry I haven't been able to review before this. I've been crazy busy. I really liked this story, and am honered that you put in my little suggestion of the kiss. It was perfectly placed. Overall great story. Look forward to be reading more from you. |
| Cherazz22784 2007-08-19 ch 6, | abuseI can't tell you how many times I tried to review for this. Everytime I tried, the review and messaging system was down. You're too ** yourself! I think this one came out great too and what a lovely ending to it too =D Loved the suspense and the subplots. Jackie was a little witch! And I still chuckle at the thought of Shari xD Yes, that kiss at the end was really sweet and he most definitely does love her. Great fic again Tigerlily! |
| laura sedai 2007-08-18 ch 6, | abuseWell, it took him long enough to work that out! Very good, any chance of a sequel to this or am I being overly hopeful? |
| chipsnopotatoes 2007-08-15 ch 6, | abuseI liked your version of Doyle's other woman story, except for the fact that she still lived at the end - haha :). Very nice sweet ending. It's about time he realized it. Loved it as much as She Did. Hope you continue to write more Nadia/Doyle! |
| Shadowsakura321 2007-08-15 ch 6, | abuse0_0 aw TT_TT I loved it! great work grl! : D |
| laura sedai 2007-08-13 ch 5, | abuseGood, but I'm slightly confused as to how Shari got released. Did I read a chapter too quickly and miss something? |
| Maverick500 2007-08-11 ch 5, | abuseI liked this chapter a great deal, but I thought Jackie made it to easy. Please update soon |
| Shadowsakura321 2007-08-11 ch 5, | abuseawesomeness!! ^^ great job. |
| chipsnopotatoes 2007-08-11 ch 5, | abusei am dying to know jackie and doyle's back story. great drama in this chapter but one small beef, why isn't doyle taking nadia to medical himself?! |
| laura sedai 2007-08-10 ch 4, | abuseOh no! Poor Doyle! And poor Shari (as I presume Jackie set her up). |
| AlyCat 2007-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThanks for keeping the Nadia/Doyle ship sailing. It's the most intriguing relationship and you have made so many great stories with it. |
| chipsnopotatoes 2007-08-09 ch 4, | abusewow! Doyle is in so much trouble now...he's in the doghouse with Nadia, and Shari might just sue his tail off. He better shape up fast! enjoying this fic much. |
| Maverick500 2007-08-09 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. Is Jackie gonna be found out. Please update soon |