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| Reviews for Chasing Victoire |
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   chibi angelle 5/9/08 . chapter 5not bad. |
| Colleen 8-O 5/9/08 . chapter 1 Excellent. This peice really caught my attention. |
| Dibss 2/7/08 . chapter 5 I think it’s a really good FF so far! ) Eri just gets on my nerves.. the git! Hugs and cookies, LS |
| SingingBird812 12/30/07 . chapter 5 I'm glad you've updated this story again. :) This chapter was great. :) |
| sorrybut 10/21/07 . chapter 4 hey, this is good. keep writing. I like Teddy, and I think you need to develop some of your other characters as well. |
| HyuugaBride 9/17/07 . chapter 4 Very nice plot, so far. I does my soul good to see something well written on the internet. Excellent grammar and spelling. Please keep up the beautiful work! |
| AliceInSomewhereland 8/28/07 . chapter 4 I think I know who it is! Anyway, I love this. I love the plot, and I especially love how LONG you make your chapters. Post more soon. Cheers! x3*Mary |
| bookboy238 8/20/07 . chapter 4 Prr-etty good:) |
| KaKe3535 8/19/07 . chapter 3 Poor Madelyn that stupid Slytherin boy needs to leave her alone.. |
| Phoenix Soup 8/11/07 . chapter 3 Tell you what, if you don't procrastinate, i'll send you more reviews! |
| Snaily 8/11/07 . chapter 3 I like this one! I'm reading every VicTed story I can get my hands on. Great job, can't wait until the update! |
| SingingBird812 8/11/07 . chapter 3 This is really good so far. I can't wait to read more. :D |
| AliceInSomewhereland 8/10/07 . chapter 3 The only place in this chapter where a sentence was kinda hard to understand was "There were some more to Ravenclaw and even more the Hufflepuff before there was another Gryffindor." Everyone makes mistakes, so just keep an eye out for typos is all I meant. Also, it's Parvati Patil, not Pavarti. Again, typos. But I am of the opinion that as long as we know who you're talking about, it's all good. Anyway. Enough critque-ness. I love this fic. And I love the fact that you named a character Xavier, and he's somehow connected with vampires. The name is really kickass, and so are vampires. haha. You write really well, and I can't wait for more. Please post soon! Cheers! x3*Mary |
| KaKe3535 8/7/07 . chapter 2 *laughs* i love how you changed his hair to pink.. |
| AliceInSomewhereland 8/5/07 . chapter 2 This is so cute. I really like it. Some of the sentences are kinda hard to understand, so just look over what you've written before you post it to make sure everything makes sense. Besides that, I have to say I'm quite glad someone is expanding on JKR's small input about Teddy and Victoire, and I can't wait for more. Cheers! x3*Mary |
