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mj0621
2007-08-29
ch 3,
abuseAYY!
WTH?! LOL ang bsa ko for some reason Mighty Joe Young. LMAO!
kya pla. :P no sense. -_-; ala, wats happening to me.

ay... pus na sya? :'(

damn, two hours... d b kulang un? hehe. jk.

cute dyl saying he's a big bro na. :D more ate?

-mj(wgf)
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2007-08-28
ch 3,
abuseAw! It's over?!?!?!??! No fair. :-p




Dylan is so freaking cute...and I know I say that every time. :o) But it's so true! You write him so well!





And YAY for friskiness! ;o)



LOVED IT!


~mandi *_*
citeyoursource
2007-08-23
ch 3,
abuseGreat story.

hahaha, Meet Joe Black. 'cause Claire Forlani (Peyton) is in it, right? Or is there a different reason why you put it in there.
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2007-08-23
ch 2,
abuseLOL! I know I'm behind in reading and reviewing, but you used 'Meet Joe Black' because Claire Forlani is in that movie. :-p But I'm probably the last person to answer that question.




"I didn't do it!" ROFL! I love Dylan. He's so cute! Of course you didn't do it sweetie; she's just hungry! TeeHee!



LOVE IT! Onto the next one...


~mandi *_*
Moriel21
2007-08-22
ch 3,
abuseCate babes, this chapter was fabulous! ;) I want to wrap Dylan up in my arms and snuggle him forever! He is SO adorable! And that he likes Sound of Music...that is my favorite movie! :D And Smacked friskiness...well you know I always love that! ;) Great job as always babes! :D
magic-munchies
2007-08-22
ch 3,
abuseI love sound of music! A classic! Loved this like I loved all the other fic's you wrote :D

Maarty!
Murgy31
2007-08-22
ch 3,
abuseIt was a great ending. I loved it!
mj0621
2007-08-17
ch 2,
abusewoot.
so cute-hot-touching at the same time XD
ate, i think i didnt need to know about that O_o; LMAO
i tried figuring out why you used the movie... cant. :p rats, and i wanted the cookie XD

-mj(wgf)
Moriel21
2007-08-16
ch 2,
abuseLol, I love it Cate babes! This was a totally great chapter! I love the when Mac stands his ground he really stands his ground line! Lol, that totally cracked me up! Love frisky Smacked...it makes me happy! And yeah pretty much can't wait to see their excuses when Dylan starts figuring things out! ;)
Murgy31
2007-08-16
ch 2,
abuseWhat a cute chapter! I am glad that you're writing Dylan again.
cjfun
2007-08-16
ch 2, anon.
abusei just love adorable dylan...more of them pls?
PintSizeGenius
2007-08-16
ch 2,
abuseAw! Yay! Dylan's back! That kid is too cute! Great story, can't wait for the next chapter! PSG x
tonik2255
2007-08-16
ch 2,
abusei love it dylan is so cute and stella and mac i just love this little universe of stories you have :)
Paly Messer Stokes
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseI love Dylan!!

Well... i'm not Stella... and I don't have a guy like Mac by my side right now, but... I want a baby like Dylan

Please continue!!

Love a lots

Paly
mj0621
2007-08-09
ch 1,
abuseThump-thump-thump.

tsktsk... still can't keep it quiet down there eh? XD
LMAO

OMG Blue! yay! not to mention Maggie's here. double yay!
^_^ more ate. more.

goodness... bugs daw eh noh?XD
ang cute!

-mj(wgf)
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