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Reviews for: The First Night
JaBoyYa
2009-07-30 . chapter 1
nice
Emeralde
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
I have to admit that I never really liked stories about Harry and the others kids, because I didn't want the adventure to be over, but, well, I love this <3 it's wonderfull! This one is so going into my favorits <3 brilliant!
B'Atrix
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
I feel very blessed to come across such a gifted author like you. You captured the emotions of young Teddy wonderfully. This definitely goes onto my favs.
Lucie - or Lux
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
That was very, very good, and I don't say that often. :)

I love the way you described Teddy's relationships with Harry and with Ginny - you did a wonderful job of depicting Harry in a way that his eleven-year-old godson would see him, very believable. And the mention of Andromeda and how she wasn't to be trusted naming things was fantastic.

And the mention of the fathers never known by their sons - so poignant - you did a great job of imbuing emotion with getting sappy.

All in all, you made Teddy seem very human, and very real, and quite enjoyable. Thanks for a great read!
LOV3theARTS
2008-02-08 . chapter 1
ugh! Marmite?? that stuff is so disgusting hahahaha
PaddyWaddy
2007-10-28 . chapter 1
My god, that was incredibly cute!
odogoddess
2007-09-16 . chapter 1
This is a very sweet story. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing.
katie janeway
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
Aww. Very cute. I think this is the first fic referencing DH that I like...
emuroo
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
This was very well-written. You did a very good job at portraying the emotions.
xxanglophilexx
2007-08-03 . chapter 1
Goodness, this was too sweet and adorable. I loved your Teddy. He was so sweet and insecure, and it was nice how he got to speak to his father. I loved it. :)
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