Are you going to update soon?

I want you to update soon... please?

I needz moar~!

Lovely.

I love your work! I read all of Dirge and I can honestly say it was the last thing that I read that made me cry! (if you knew me you would know what kind of accomplishment that is) As far as this story goes... I LOVE it! You have characters that have so much depth and personality that they are very believeable. Keep this up! It sounds that you have a crazy life but you should keep writing!

I read all 6 chapters in one go, and you definitely need to write more.

Don't ever stop writing, it's beautiful, it's inspiring... writing from people like you puts a little life back into my eyes, thank you.

I need to do some painting now.

Thank you. Don't be afraid to email. Re (*forgotten login* :S)

-_-lol, squall's a hobo! please update soon!-_-

very interesting.
the person painting sounds like you without the being a guy and puking and the other guy things.. but i enjoy kind of makes me want to go play my instrument... im going to go do that anyway its good. and U NEED LONGER STORIES... I LOVE REALLY LONG CHAPTERS AND JUST LONG STORIES... this one is only 6 but its ok so far... well great but not long enough. i hate them short...

luvya
Stevie

how did I get all the way to chapter 6 without noticing? crazy. anyway, i am loving this with a burning fiery passion right now (omgod, no pun intended -_-). please keep writing? this is fantabulous.

This is really good! I think I've become hooked on your stories now...Must go read more!

Sorry I'm being such a terrible reviewer as of late. I'm also be extremely economical(read as lazy) and combining the reviews for all the chapters of this story so far. Please forgive me.

I really love this story though and it seems a bit different than some of the other ones you've written. I like the feel of it so far though and I can't wait for the next chapter. Leon as a hobo is also extremely entertaining. Definitely the sexiest hobo in the entire world. You've definitely got my interest piqued when it comes to Cloud. I definitely need to know what's on the canvas he's hiding. Plus, we need some Cloud/Riku lovin' up in here. Hope that's coming soon.

Anywho, I apologize again for being such a bum(especially after you wrote a fic for me) and I'm gonna try to finishing catching up tomorrow since my only class for the day is cancelled.

-combo-

I'm also sorry to hear about your friend. I lost a couple of good friend in high school due to the combination of alcohol and motor vehicles so I know it's not easy to deal with. These kinds of tragedies just help us appreciate life all the more.

Hi babes,

Okay, this might not be the place to go into too much of this, but I want to tell you... It turns out that I have two of your older stories, and neither of them even compare to this fic. One of them I didn't get past the first chapter because the grammar was questionable, and the scenes were so short and choppy. Here, in "The Human Need", they're always well-developed, and the length is much more appropriate. I honestly wouldn't have thought the person writing those old fics could get to the point of writing something like this, but this story feels so natural that it seems like you've had it in you all along.

I hope that's not too harsh. I was just really struck by the change in quality. You've really improved so much! And, whatever, my old stuff is really, really terrible: grammar-wise, syntax-wise, plot-wise... So I'm not judging, just saying...

Anyway, the story... I love it. You've done a fantastic job developing all the characters and their stories. I'm especially anxious to find out what's going on with Cloud. You've built up that up well, which takes a lot of skill, treading that line between keeping them interested and being secretive almost to the point of alienation. You're not, though, so good job!

And even though the part with Axel had been well foreshadowed, it was still really shocking to read this latest chapter. The way Riku told the story was absolutely perfect. I don't know if many authors could have handled that moment so well. Sometimes Riku's actions may seem a little extreme, but if I've ever heard of a reason for such behaviour, it's got to be that. So very, very sad. D: He needs Cloud~~

AH. There was something else, but I've forgotten. Sorry. Hm, I like the POV, but that wasn't it... Maybe it'll come to me next time. Good luck with story, and all your writing! I can't wait to see where you'll be in a year, or even your next fic. This shows a lot of growth as another.

Oh, did you find a beta? I wouldn't mind, if you need one. I may miss a lot of my own mistakes, and there are probably a couple terrible typos in this review, but I mostly find other people's. Haha. It's so hard to edit your own work, because you know what it's supposed to say and fill that in. D:

jajajajajaja, you made leon a hobo is riku going to bring him to his apartment?. claud has mood swings

Well that was a couple interesting turns of events.
Now I'm quite interested to hear what Clouds deal is. He seems rather tempermental...he also seems closer to Riku than anyone seems to realise.
Riku's reaction was over the top, but expected. I like the way this chapter ended, and I'm looking forward to learning what happens next.

oh thats sad...sorry
i didnt mean to u kno bring up any sad thoughts wit my comment really

yay. two chapters!
man, riku was kinda dumb..suicide?
i feel so bad for him
but he really does need to move on.
thanks:)