Is this story dead? Or has someone else taken over?

Dam good story, i hope you continue it.

Plz!update I know its been long but plz do I love your story!

Intriguing... I think I'll fave this.

In Feb 25 (2013) on the Bing page, I saw ravens or crows I a pond with lily pads and some crows had wrapped their wings around themselves so that they were covered. I think that Naruto should use his wings like that when he is fighting on top of a surface. You should look it up. PS; I think his sword, formally Zabuza's Kubikiribocho (or was it hocho?) could be nicknamed the "Harbringer of Darkness." It's kinda fitting considering the powers the fallen angels gave him and his wings. Doesn't help that people think he is a demon.

Do you mean Narut was on the side of the rock spike, balancing on his stomach?

Kushina has deep red hair you can't mistake from anything else and Naruto got his looks from his father, including his eyes. I'm not sure how you didn't know how Kushina really looked like yet knew so much (but a huge secret that I hope you are aware on now, she being the 2nd (I hope that answered to what I was hinting at)) about her. Oh, well. Meeting his parents was an unexpected suprise in the story and I liked it.
You should add more feeling to your story, because everyone seems to be taking everything to calmly and a bit blandly, and Naruto seems to have matured to much, in which you have failed to give an explaination why. Otherwise needing to have little more grammar fixes, your story is good.

I like the idea. But I am bound to ask, dont you find everyones reaction to the winds a bit... lacking? I fear I did not quiet understand... how did everyone took the fact that Naruto suddenly has wind with such ease? I mean Kakashi didnt even question him about it? I find that pretty unrealistic.

Once there was a girl named Mia Stonecrest ,she went out in the Winter Woods,but then-she died Chapter 2-sorry):

booooooo

i hope you continue the story it was very very good

awesome story this is one of the best i love love locve it

I wish this didn't die... So much potential to.

Well this is rather new. I had an idea similar to this actually, but I'm not a writer so it's good to know that someone else thought of a similar idea.

I already love this story. I lost it and then found it again thank you for writing this great story.

Please please please update soon I absolutely love this story