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ladylookslikeadude
2008-05-02 . chapter 4
That was cool
Escalus
2007-08-15 . chapter 4
heh, a pleasure to read, once more. And the Kabuto bit I'm refering to is far into Shippuuden, so far that to explain would be SO big a plot twist that I'd ruin much of the beginning of post-timeskip Naruto (seriously, it's a little like Pein and the power-behind-the-throne/true-power-behind-the-Sharingan thing. Suffice to say that Kabuto thanks Naruto, calling him an inspiration to...oh crap, how to say this...maybe define himself as an individual...? My memory's a little faulty...hm...and as thanks Kabuto gives him information...I think. This bit's REALLY wierd...
RobotPirateNinja
2007-08-15 . chapter 2
What about Lee? Also, you never did say how Neji reacted when he learned about Kyuubi itself.
Wyltk
2007-08-14 . chapter 4
I like it. That's pretty much all I can think to say. It fit that the Kyuubi would want his host to be strong in his place. And I loved how you merged it with events in the series! See you next time!
Wyltk
2007-08-14 . chapter 3
Jiraiya... Perfect. I loved his section! Tsunade was good. Orochimaru was good. Both of them fit and were intersting.. BUT I LOVE JIRAIYA!
Sorry, it's the fangirl in me. On a more coherent note... I can see Jiraiya thinking of Naruto as the 4th and slowly changing his mind. The last line makes everything fit. It was a little confusing but once I read over it again I understood what you were trying to say. Nice job! Can't wait to read the next one.
Wyltk
2007-08-14 . chapter 2
Hmm... To be honest I didn't like this chapter as much as the first. However, I think part of the reason is that I've never been able to connect with Neji as a character.
Sasuke, on the other hand, I thought was really great. I like the idea of Sasuke thinking Naruto is always one up on him. Especially considering it seems that Anime Sasuke is always getting what he wants. I like the spin of he gets it but it is never good enough for him. I think that really fits his character.
Can't wait to read the others! I'll try to be good and review each one. PS: I love drabbles! That's why in some of my other Fandoms I have a series called "Choices". It's a perfect series for drabbles that I'll never finish and always seem to be leaving someone hanging.
Escalus
2007-08-14 . chapter 2
A greatly readable fic!
I hope to see more, consider these options:Naruto's ennemies. Seriously, Orochimaru would be interesting, Itachi's always had a funny attitude regarding Naruto and often violence, though I think the one that would really take the cake would be Kabuto. Throughout the whole series he's been a weird guy, when the two of them end up in confrontation Kabuto taunts Naruto whenever the boy hesitates, not letting the boy become sentimental, and the older man has only ever seemed to be going through the motions of being human, and THEN, creme de la creme (can't put the accents...dammit...), is the part that came up fairly recently between the two. I'm not going to write about it (spoiler)...but it was...revealing...about Kabuto's character. If you know what I'm talking about, then take it into consideration, if not...well...may I suggest you you read the manga online, if only because it's the most up-to-date you can get without reading the Japanese Weekly Shonen Jump. A MASSIVE PLOT TWIST, like...OMG beyond what I can express on paper!
Pridefall
2007-08-12 . chapter 1
Great insight into the lives of the characters, though Temari being shy is a little bit of a stretch and having so much cursing in the Tayuya section of the drabble made it a bit hard to read.
Wyltk
2007-08-03 . chapter 1
I really liked this idea. It was well written with just enough of everyones personality to keep it interesting. You did an awesome job and I would love to see some of these for the men or just other characters in general!
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