OMIGOD
*drools*
Loved it!

It was complete. Thoughtful and meaningful. The lust wasn't carnal, a meaningless fulfillment of need and instinct. It made you think about what is important, what makes love tangible. I think you captured what love should be; understanding, acceptance, tenderness. I forgot the "Naruto" aspect, it was the meeting of two people. Kudos.

I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you.

I thought that Kakuzu X Temari was slightly..ugh..

but you proved me wrong!! And totally changed my impression of Kakuzu!

You write really well and keep it up!

Beautiful.

So...hot...

I think my brain is still frying. But that was beautiful; steamy and downright hot, but beautiful.

I love your story. It has lots suspense in parts and romance and drama in other parts of it. I loved it all.

holy AWESOME! seriously sexy and all that jazz, but a good story. love how you took the time to develop the characters and make their 'relationship' seem viable. not many people bother with that. well, played...

Wow. This is an amazing fic. I'd never thought of the pairing before, and in fact I was a bit unsure when I began reading this. But you changed my mind.

The interaction is flawless, completely in character and reasonably paced. I was worried they would jump into bed at the first opportunity, but you didn't rush it, and the way they danced around one another was brilliantly done.

I don't think I've ever enjoyed reading such a strange pairing so much.

Beautiful...

It brought back the hopeless romantic within me that I thought had passed away long ago.

I thought it was really romantic. They'd kinda make a good couple.. despite the age differenc.

W-O-W! How many times must I say it? Wow! Your stories are ridiculously amazing! I luvvie Kakuzu!

damn, that was SO awesom @_@ i mean, it was romantic, it was sexy, and it was damn near cannon as that kind of pairing could ever get X3 thanks so much for writing this! and the lemon scene, ~swons~ i'm sorry, that kinda of detail and emotion takes talent and skillz o_o wich you seem to have allot of =3

i LOved it so much

Oh, this is good.