I think this is a great story adn I hope you keep writing.

also harry would not negle ct his childfren, he doesnt likew fighting, and thered wouldnt be abar in a school

adding to my other comment (ch 1)

he wouldnt call hermione a bitch, they are friends

and her saying are you defying me makes her sound like a prissy brat.

and considering she folled all the uys into loving her, she has no right to be je;ouse

I like the plot and this s well written

cation this has flames

harry know how to cook

Raina is a mary sue because
people say she isperfect
she hates imperfectionm
she has the perfect look and voice
she can charm anyone
she named her child after herself

if she was a veela she would be disowne dbecause malfoy are all for blood purity.

Raina is the one who should be in anger management b/c she started the fight and was the one who cussed harrys friends. harryu ws just protecting his friens hermione wouldnt agree with Raina

if she isnt letting him see there children she cant complain and why isnt she losng points fr a bad marriage and speaking i that, how is trowing someone out part of marriage.

also, just because harryis takling to a girl dosent mean they are dating. you said she didnt like him so why is she planning cho demie? and "Im upset he isnt hiding it" 1)they would be tipsy 2)she is acting like she hates him and 3)it is a FAKE MARRIAGE!

Harry was protecting his friend and rain has anger management because she yells at people for not being perfect, and started cussing people for no reason

That's what I think but I like the plot but some things seem out of charecter

Good story but harry is acting way out of charecter he cooked and cleaned for his aunt and uncle and riana sounds like a borderline marysue in my opinion

Oh and are you defying me makes her seem mean and makes her act like a queen.

Sorry if any of this was mean but it's what I think

So far this story sounds a story you could tell the whole family.

intersting story, but come on does harry have to be an idiot. didnt he spend like all is life cooking for his uncle, aunt, and cousin? anyway thats all i have to say

please update, i can't wait to see what happens next

Harry n'est pas sencer savoir cusiner à cause de sa famille

Interesting story... I hope you'll update soon

harry kowns how to cook and clean

Pretty neat, I'd really like to see how this go's.

Good idea and good start! update soon!

Intresting, can't wait for more