Please update soon I just read it all and can't wait how this will turn out :D
Great story plot line I love it ;D

aww derek has to win her back! update plz!

ooh this is so good and very well written! Please please please update soon!

Addictive as always! I can't wait to read more.

Poor All, poor, poor all in this...

Good chapter, good to see you agen.

Update soon, please. This is really very addicting.

Oh man! Come onderek! You can do it! Caseys' talkin crazy! COme on Derek!! Win her!!
~Crystal

Awesome chapter I hope your get your Laptop problems sorted out.

Cute!

Update soon please.

omg! why does she have to keep lying to him! just tell him and be a happy family. :( update soon please.

Oh man! I love it!
~Crystal

It was great!

O, THAT was good. Can I kill them?...No?...OK.

Interesting story. Can't wait to read more...Update soon!