Lovely one-shot RKC :) I loved the idea!

You have a few minor punctuation errors, but nothing big.

All in all, I really liked it. I think you did a great job on this - writing, descriptions, metaphores, portrayal...

Great work!

Juju

Okay so I found this on someone fav list and I like Ron and i like Rainbows so I decided to click on this and see what it was about. Its really good. I especially like the idea of 8yr old Ron chasing after rainbows b/c when I was little thats what me and my brothers did. We were in a race to see who would get the gold. lol Anywhoo this was really well written and very interesting. I especially like the rainbow at the end. It conveyed the message of hope.
-hondagirl

Another great story...!

Pinky x XD

Beautiful, simple and straightforward. I love it!!

Ha, I know I already reviewed this at the RL but I had to tell you how much I loved it again.

I really do enjoy how you made the rainbow something other than a thing to always be enjoyed, how you gave it deeper meaning.

Of course, it does represent hope in the end, which makes us all happy :)

Paddy

I saw this in "Rainbow Magic" and decided to review it as a one shot . . . I really like hwo you've described the DA and Ron's reinstated faith in rainbows. It really says mountains about his character, doesn't it? =]