mamemitsu? such a random name...and this is a girl?? sry i had to comment on that.

YOU LOST THE GAME AGAIN! lol



i don't get it.

it was a great chapter

I can't wait for more!

i loved it and it gets better and better

tip though describe the surroundings more often

YOU MAKE IT SOUND LIKE I'M STUPID OR SOMETHING (the held back comment at the end)! I AM NOT! Well, that is an arguable point... ehe


And why didn't I tell her about the DE thing? *is curious...*


HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE plz

WHAT ABOUT ME?

that was a really great chapter

Who says it's still beating?!?!?!?! lol



And IF you were to continue with the current unexplained explanations for why I know Japanese and all, then I would know what she was thinking I'd follow without making it seem to obvious (like I'd ask who... be all innocent like... ^^ and she'd hopefully ask about the whole DE thing and why/how I was still alive. :D

even though you write short chapters they give you as much information as a big chapter and are still really good to read and that is a hard thing to do.

i just have to ask who is the romance with ?

WOH!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! IM HAPPY! HAHAHA! i wonder what she'll say to me...

i really liked how you wrote the chapter it makes sense that he would try to make her think Harry and the rest of them are traitors

That was another good chapter and you are welcome for the help, if you ever need any more just ask.

it was a nicely written cliff hangar, i can say that myself have only written one good one in all of my writing on and that was on my Pitch Black fanfic. i may have written one in my Spiderman fanfic but oh well that doesn't matter right now.

it is actually hard to write a good enough cliff hangar that people want to read the next chapter quicker than they originally want to. That was one of those cliff hangars it was short and sweet. not sweet as in nice obviously but sweet as in oh never mind i hope you get what i meant.

i really loved it and all you have to do sometimes is write anything to do with the story and you will find one of the ideas can make the next chapter.

i hope that helps.

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(")_(") i hope this plot bunny helps his name is Remus also known as my Harry Potter plot bunny he gives me a lot of help even though i haven't used him for Harry Potter yet.

i hope he helps as well.

Btw, when will Mamemitsu come in? AND PUT IN THE BAL! you don't have to add in any of the other *coughfathercough* stuff or about our dates *coughcough* BUT IF YOU DO MAKE SURE TO PUT IN THE DRESSES!