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L-lover
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
lol. That was cute.
thechickenlittle
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
oh this is crack. pure crack, and funny as h2ll!
Anticia
2008-04-22 . chapter 1
hahah, I'm soo glad you wrote it! It's just fair! ^o^
WAY TO GO MIKEY! *w*
I felt really sorry for him, I would feel horrified if someone would stole my comics, children-book collections or whatever I love (especially related with art^^).

I looked over your list of stories...You have soo few...T.T
I mean, I wish you were at least 6folds more to read them all! *w*
This far I havn't read or saw kenshin so I delay to read those. :)
Um...don't you feel temptation to write more TMNT...? *w* It would be totally awesome! ^o^
ChibiLover123
2008-02-21 . chapter 1
...Oh my lord...Why didn't they do an episode like this? I'd laugh my ass off when I saw it! This is AWESOME!^^
Lunar-ninja
2007-09-03 . chapter 1
(snrk) Bwahahahaha! That's amazing! Great one-shot, very amusing. (cackles) Gen got what he deserved.

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Kay the Cricketed
2007-08-31 . chapter 1
*cackles madly*

There is nothing better than reading a fic and giggling like a maniac the entire way through it. Your Mikey is as perfect as your Leo. I SRYSLY LOVE THEM. SO MUCH.

Also, it was uber fun to read your Usagi. XD I totally love it. The ending was GOLD.

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*goes back to read and cackle madly again* SUCH A GREAT SET-UP.
sunbune
2007-08-18 . chapter 1
lol! Loved it. You called Mikey's eyes "rabid".

Poor Gen! But really he deserves it. Grin.
Gemini Willow
2007-08-10 . chapter 1
lol, this was really great and funny!
LadyLeo
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Hilarious :D I love your style!
Elsiah
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
Haha, great job! The chase was very well written. I totally forgot about Gen stealing those comics, and I laughed out loud when I realized that was what Mikey was after. Usagi and Leo were perfect. Now I'm curious about Underdark; I may have to check that out. Anyway, nice work here. Keep it up!
Carayzee Anonymous
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
Holy. Crap. This story is some kind of freaking hilarious, my friend. >w< I was laughing out loud pretty much the whole time. ^_^ Nice job, bud. *gives two thumbs up*
Toki1
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
haha thats was awesome and cute. man i love Usagi.
princessebee
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
VERY cute! The buildup of suspense then the punchline was very good, I lol'd! ;)
Winnychan
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
Too cute! Haha, I love your work. This was short but very sweet. Leonardo and Usagi's serene observations made a great contrast to Mikey going mental on Gen.

After seeing such passion over the retrieval of comics can Leo really insist that Mikey give his "funny books" to charity?

Then again, this is the same Mikey who fought so hard to get alien dolls returned to be donated to orphan kids so maybe he doesn't even need prompting. He has such a big heart. When he's not leaping out of trees at people screaming bloody murder anyway. ;)

XOXO

Winnychan
memyselfandi89
2007-08-05 . chapter 1
rotflol OH YES!! Sweet revenge! I love it that Leo and Usagi are just sitting there trying to ignore the murder occuring. It just makes an already hilarious situation that much funnier. Awesome!
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