Heh, I remember you telling me on skype that someone said they "read this story for the slash". Maybe in some ways I can begin to see, in this chapter, how it might loosely look like that from a certain point of view. Specifically when Inferno and Rattrap are wrestling, and there is mention of their faces being close together, and Inferno can smell Rattrap's "cheesy breath" on his face. XD

Plus I presume that the part where Dinobot is thinking about how Terrorsaur is vain, and about how no longer "has a pretty face" that might be taken the wrong way, too XD

Anyway I think it's definitely an interesting twist on what happened in the episodes at the very start of Season 2 of Beast Wars. I do like the fact that Optimus didn't die/go missing, and Terrorsaur and Scorponok are still alive.

I also like the twist that the Vok found a better method, so to speak, than just torching the planet. I know that the Maximals and Predacons dont' really like it, but I'm just saying that it's interesting to see that the Vok came up with a better, non-violent approach in this case. XD

I guess that's all I have to say about this chapter.

Wow that chapter was certainly long. Hehe maybe it was a bit... slow in places, but I'd say you did an excellent job in keeping everyone in character.

I bet it was tricky to write, considering there are so many characters that you had to write reactions for. I applaud your ability to write that much and keep everyone in character. I'm not sure if I would have had the patience or the attention-span to write something like this.

Anyway I think it's a good chapter overall. I'll read the next one later if I have time.

Hehe I think it's interesting. And the time/setting is a perfect way to kick things off. XD I noticed a few spelling errors here and there but otherwise it's good. Especially everyone's reactions to finding out they're human now.

I only read chapter 1 so far but I'll read more when I get to it.

Found your story last night and read it. Have to admit, this is a different twist to the Transformers turning human bit. I'll follow it again whenever it is you get over the writer's block.

Wasn't going to say, initially, but I actually find myself hoping that you will keep Starscream around instead of doing what other writers do and get rid of him shortly after bringing him in. I'm not suggesting you reform him, but maybe find a way to bring him under control. That would be rather amusing.

I have a question. Are you ever going to finish this story? because I really want to read the rest.

so scorponok habit move to his teeth (hope they had dentist), and how about waspinator ? don't forget that in the cartoon, he get blown up, burned, smashed, pummeled, shot, squished, shredded, and butchered. will he stay that way ?

the story went great so far, i wonder if they went back to their original body, unless you permanently make them human of course. i have a request, can you draw a human version of nightscream ? if you didn't like it you didn't have to, im just curious about the human version of the beast machine's cast

nice story, and poor tarantulas! i seen your art in , can you make a story about human grievous (including him turning into a human) and the effect on the clone wars ?

this is such a cool fic! i'm a big fan now. i got an idea: MegatronXInferno! you like? i thought you were gonna do it but now it seems like you won't, at this point, anyway [(that's what she said)(don't ask...)]. it would be so funny, i reckon. and CUTE! might be a bit hard to keep them in character, but a challenge is a challenge. i challenge you, organic! lol, scuse the pun.
moving right along...
"sun-cheese, lolly-cheese and rain-cheese. everything that's cheese is what i feel about CHEESE!"
let's see Meggzy say THAT! lol. if he were drunk that would be easier... among other things... *hint hint* (dirty mind)

Omg,who's the guy who is facinated by Inferno's form?

great chapter can't wait for an update are silverbolt and blackarachnia gonna hook up maybe you could draw a picture of their humane forms kissing and post it on your devon art page

Interesant. How Quickstrike will turn Predacon? Are you thinking about Silverbolt/Black?. I hope to see a new chapter soon!

awesome chapter. update soon please.

Great update on your version of the Beast Wars characters as organics.

Good luck on chapter 22 and on your other stories too.

Smart girl, Ariazor. I really liked the part with Quickstrike and Terrorsaur, that was funny I thought. I hope you up date this soon. ^^