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| French Pop 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseVery good and well-written, but a pet-peeve of mine that is apparently a huge trend with the Saw fanfics, are the frequent appearances of onomatopoeia. Aside from that, this story rocks! |
| Shadow demon wolf girl 09 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, Cool! Good story |
| Jellycheeks 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseIt was a good game, properly executed. The ending ruined it. Jigsaw rarely lies. In fact, the only time he lies is in saw 3 when he tells the subject that the black guy is the guy that killed his son when really it is jigsaw. Further, jigsaw puts people in life or death situations. He's made one subjects rip through his bones and tendons to escape chains, he's made a photographer rip through his eye to get a key. What makes this victim so special that he wouldn't kill him, he's just going to paralyze him and wait for him to kill himself? I do think this is the best fan fic for saw, it's just the last paragrah is horrible. |
| GCrockergirl92 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseThis idea was good and I think it was exicuted well but it doesn't seem to fit Jigsaw's method of operation. One has to ask, how is he supposed to get through life without his fingers now? Anyway, good story and good idea- just doesn't really fit Jigsaw's MO. |
| wickedpirate666 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseYay! First review! This story owned! Great job! |