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| Bobbie3926 2008-08-01 ch 6, | abuseI liked it but didn't because of soda's death. Thanks for the story. Hope there is another chapter soon. |
| Greaser4life 2008-05-02 ch 6, | abuseI'm surprised, a good steve fanfiction! lol, and you dont have many reviews and its one of the best stories on here. Very good job, though, i just have a few tips, if Steve was a hard core druggie like you say, then he would need to shot up more than once a day, he would only thing about it and constantly worry. You may want to research some side effects of this drug to help you story. Good luck and update soon! you have a new fan! Greaser4Life I love how you have all the characters placed in their lives, its nothing compared to any other story; like darry living with his three kids but ponyboy living in Canada! HA thats priceless! good job again! cant wait to read more! |
| Operated by Hall Corp 2008-04-07 ch 5, | abuseThis is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories on here. Keep it up |
| sunshinegrl23 2008-02-27 ch 4, | abusevery good story! Please update soon! |
| T.J.Grei 2008-02-12 ch 4, | abuseI didn't expect Steve to be shooting up. Wow, nice twist. |
| Fosterchild 2008-02-12 ch 4, | abuseDamn. I wasn't expecting that line at the end and in fact, I had forgotten about it briefly. I like that Pony had written him letters. It's almost like Pony adopted him as a brother, too, even though he wasn't fond of him. He could see past any animosity they once had knowing that Steve was alone out there. Good job. |
| Two Bits Babe 2007-11-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseI love it! I can't wait to read the rest! It is really great you have to finish it.:) |
| SisterCat144 2007-11-24 ch 3, | abusei luv this story plz update asap plz! =) |
| whennerdscollide 2007-11-23 ch 3, | abuseWho ever thought Two-Bit could have EVER started to take life seriously? lol I like your story. Well-written. :) update soon |
| stereochick 2007-11-23 ch 3, | abuseM. Good story. Very realistic situation and conversation. Everyone always makes a production out of people meeting and all, which is awkward, and I refuse to believe that Darry and Pony wouldn't stay in touch. (But then, I also refuse to believe Soda really died.);) |
| whennerdscollide 2007-10-24 ch 2, | abuseWow. Ponyboy just semi-ran off to another country?! 0_0 I thought technically he wouldn't get drafted b/c he was a minor, but I'm not an expert. Although, that is a preetty good reason to run off to Canada. I like how your story's written. :) Everything's in character and stuff. Can't wait for the next chapters |
| SisterCat144 2007-10-24 ch 2, | abuseyay u finally updated! can't wait to read more! hope steve see's pony soon or w/e! update soon! =D |
| T.J.Grei 2007-10-24 ch 2, | abuseI've been waiting for an update! And here it is! It's a great story, continue! |
| Hawaiichick 2007-10-23 ch 2, | abuseWhat a great story...kinda sad cause of all the pain that the gang has gone through, but real interesting. Can't wait for more scenes with Darry, Two-Bit and maybe Ponyboy. |
| Greaser Girl 4 Life 2007-10-23 ch 2, | abuseYAY, you updated! It's so cute...cant wait to see what the rest of the gang think? well whats left of them anyway |