"How could you do this to a pregnant man?"

Lolz I'm so yelling that to my friend BitchMuffin the next time she brutally attacks my other friend RetardMuffin.
Lovely story. ^^ I'd also like to sniff laughing gas. The dentists gave me some once. But then they had to put me in a straightjacket because I was still twitching. Really bad. One second I was waiting for them to knock me out and the next, I was at home on the couch... strange... woah, got really offtrack there...

-- Amethystte

All I can say is... wow...just wow. I loved this story. I had a hard day at work and this fic was freaking hilarious, it made me feel so much better. Kudos! Great work, keep it up... I look forward to it.

Mikomikitsune

p.s. Oh and I love your writing personality, it's so refreshing... write more!

That's the fanfiction land,even man could get pregnant.^^
not the best Mpreg even with its humor,but hell,i cant stop grinning...this is so funny. And i cant resist narusasu anyway.
Keep writing and updating,say no to 'abandoned story'.
Ja.

You seem to write this for the sake of humor,hahahaha.you are so funny. There is almost no seriousness here,haha,you are funny.really.

ok this is some of the most hilarious shit i have come across in a long time. seriously. i love you. you are brilliant.

hysterical. i'm not one for mpreg but i think i'll give this a shot.

a retard, agenius, or a crazy scientist that was hilarius! omg! poor sasuke

Leave it to Sasuke to still act like a deranged psychopath while on laughing gas.
Sakura really does have all the balls in Team 7. Sai should be following them around trying to be their loveslave, or something.
Very looking forward to the next cracktastic chapter! They're hilarious

You are my fucking HERO!

This story is so funny and epic that I will seriosuly die laughing about it.


Ah, i can see my epitaph now--

"Here lies Brooke. Her love of Naruto was her downfall. Ah well, at least she died happy :D!"



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LMFAO this story is just so weird and funny and i just fucking LOVE it.
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This was funny too. I think you should have included more of Sakura trash talking the bitch/cunt/whore/etc.. that Naruto got pregnant with Sasuke though. That one snippet was funny; but not nearly enough. Why did you mention Sai? Why is he unconcious? I imagine we'll find out next chapter. It would have been good if Sasuke could have inflicted some physical pain/trauma on Sakura also.

This chapter was really, really funny. It doesn't make the whole raping/inseminating/performing secret surgery/not telling the truth before marriage_part of the story any less offensive. But this chapter on its own was very funny.

This is a seriously fucked up story. First you have Naruto volunteer to be a vessel for Orochimaru-the evil fuck who took his Sasuke away from him. The evil fuck who killed the 3rd Hokage. The evil fuck who invaded their village and killed many of their citizens and shinobi. The evil fuck who put the curse seal on Sasuke. The evil fuck who tried to kill Naruto and Tsunade. The evil fuck who tried to kill Naruto's friends when they went on a rescue mission to retrieve Sasuke. Then you have Naruto deceive Sasuke by implanting him with the fertilized egg. This is basically rape_because Naruto did not ask first before he did it. How is one to see comedy in this? You turned Naruto into a deranged, mentally deficient, rapist and tricking Sasuke into marrying the person that raped him. I'm not referring to the sex-I'm referring to the secret egg implantation/surgery Naruto performed on Sasuke to impregnate him_that's rape. An intrusion into another person's body without their consent, permission, knowledge. And what a wondrful way to start a marriage and family_by lying and raping and impregnating your mate with the man(Orochimaru; or 1/3 of him) who probably tortured and raped him while under his training. Yeah-funny. A great story to tell the grand kids--NOT. God, if I were Sasuke I'd want the thing ripped out of me and then I'd cut Naruto's balls off so he could never do anything like this again.

AHAHAHAHA*dies laughing*omgosh I love this story its to funny I cant handle the laughter AHAHAHAHA XD please ahaha please continue this story,its like laughing gas to me!

Oh my goodness... this is a confuzzling story, but so funny x] I hope you update soon, really!