very clever towards the end. i usally don't like ron angest but this was rly good put in the perfect moment.- thnkz

This is really good and really angsty. It portrays Ron's jelously perfectly and how inferior he must feel next to Harry. Well done! Although i do have a few mistakes picked out :P 'And they would all know that I was too blame' is it not 'to blame'? and is Ron not the black night and its the white queen that take him down?? Sorry! I had to say. x

That was VERY well written! I love how you showed Ron's feelings and everything. I just knew he probably felt some resentment towards Harry LONG before Goblet of Fire. Great job!

This was very well written. Thanks.

Great job! I really liked how you showed Ron's inner feelings.