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Reviews for: Checkmate
clearwatercullener
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
very clever towards the end. i usally don't like ron angest but this was rly good put in the perfect moment.- thnkz
xXStephRheaXx
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
This is really good and really angsty. It portrays Ron's jelously perfectly and how inferior he must feel next to Harry. Well done! Although i do have a few mistakes picked out :P 'And they would all know that I was too blame' is it not 'to blame'? and is Ron not the black night and its the white queen that take him down?? Sorry! I had to say. x
rhrf7
2007-11-27 . chapter 1
That was VERY well written! I love how you showed Ron's feelings and everything. I just knew he probably felt some resentment towards Harry LONG before Goblet of Fire. Great job!
JuDei
2007-08-18 . chapter 1
This was very well written. Thanks.
Norbet
2007-08-04 . chapter 1
Great job! I really liked how you showed Ron's inner feelings.
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