LOVE IT!!

I like this story!!

aw c'mon how much longer till they meet again?

not bad...I like how you used the actual events that happened in the two games...I think the fight you wrote in the end of the chapter was in...Kingdom Hearts Final Mix right?

wow. I like how you have written this. It must be tough to put the two together. Please continue soon!

Please please update soon! I really want to see what happens next.

I loved it, please update soon!

a most excellent beginning. I really hope to see this story continue. Keep up the excellent work.

Good job! Continue!

great job! nice story

wow despite the fact you've never played KH you have the facts pretty well done!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
~Beeria