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kalilamae
2007-11-16
ch 3,
abuseHee. I liked this chapter. xD

... I don't think they play Mindless Self Indulgence on the radio... but it would be totally awesome to just turn on the radio and BAM! ** All Night is playing on full volume.
kalilamae
2007-11-16
ch 1,
abuseYes... yes, good... I like it.

Except that you implied that Skinny Puppy was for people of the emo persuasion. Skinny Puppy's darkwave, or even gothic industrial. Not emo.
Ebichu Chan
2007-10-16
ch 2,
abuseSock 'poemo" was epic. So, so epic.
Diary
2007-10-07
ch 3,
abuseSo far, I'm enjoying this.
kyleisgod
2007-10-06
ch 3, anon.
abuseA crossover? :( That makes me sad. I think most crossovers are lame. Plus, if a reader doesn't follow all of the shows/characters in the crossover then they're screwed. I enjoyed your reference to the Baconator. It's a great sandwich! :) However, right after that you had Wendy suggest going to the 8-10. That I didn't like. I felt like you should've either gone all the way with the humorous wordplay or not done it at all. Usually it's funny when Cartman turns out to be right about people, but I find stoned hippie Wendy to be too OOC at times for my personal liking. However, I still love them paired up though and I LOVED the ginger joke she pulled on Cartman! It was very funny and had you stuck with that twist it might have been very interesting. Or maybe not, so I'm glad it was all a joke in the end. Stan and Henrietta are cute/funny together. Stan's goth poetry continues to be great in that it's lame, and I think I know where that story is going. I look forward to seeing it played out. I like how all the SP boys got new friends. It's realistic, while at the same time not forcing new characters into the equation. Great job there. Ha, poor Pip and Gregory. That was funny too. Kenny's closing line was all kinds of amusing, and Ike feeling sad that he can't harpoon a whale is a cute image. I love this story overall and can't wait for the next update.
Chiraru
2007-10-06
ch 3,
abuseThis story always makes me laugh! "Anti-British Defamation League", that cracked me up the most!

Keep it up :D
Sad_panda
2007-10-06
ch 3, anon.
abusegood chapter so its going to be south park and the simspons
Invaderwaffles
2007-10-06
ch 3, anon.
abuseTHAT
my dear
really made my day
Wounded Shell Of Myself
2007-10-05
ch 3,
abuseHaha, this story is so ** awesome. I need to update my emo Stan story, lol. I got another one brewing in my sick little mind as well.

But I like this...keep going.
07Matt
2007-09-09
ch 2,
abuseAWESOME!

Please update soon!

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Kouklara
2007-08-25
ch 2,
abuseOmfg XD Clyde's made-up words. I'm so gonna use them from now on.

Great characterisation, always your strong point.
LVK-DS
2007-08-20
ch 2,
abuse>"...my life is like a black sock

"stepped on all day

"everyday

"until I am full of holes

"then discarded

"unwanted

"into a waste basket."

FUKKEN LOL'D.

I love your writing.
MOAR, REVIEWING EPIC STORY, etc.
Wounded Shell Of Myself
2007-08-19
ch 2,
abuseHaha! I like this! I think Stan is a little out of character (not by being "emo", I love that), but like, he's not concerned about being hardcore or anything like that, ya know? The poetry is funny, though. That's the only thing really, try to keep in a little more in character.

And the goth kids...I read on Wikipedia that the one with the red streak in his hair is Dylan, the tall one is Ethan, and the kindergoth is Georgie. I'm not 100% sure that those are their official names but if they aren't, they're kinda the accepted names among fans, ya know?

Anyways, good start, please continue...
Hajime Morikawa
2007-08-19
ch 2,
abuse*Snickers uncontrollably* Priceless.
kyleisgod
2007-08-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseStan's poetry was a thing of beauty!! Very funny ** there! XD

I like your usage of Mole here too, which is saying something because I generally HATE how he is written in fics. You're actually using him for comedy and not angst/drama/slash though. Thank goodness for your originality. Well, I gues it might be possible that you'll use him for slash with Kenny later on, but that's pretty original in and of itself since everyone sticks him with Kyle usually.

Clyde just...doesn't appeal to me. Nor do his made-up words. I'm sure you were going for some kind of comedy there, and I'm sure it'll work for some people, but not for me. Though that's more due to personal taste than anything else.

I usually don't care much for Craig either, but the way you use him is making all the difference. I can see him as the psycho director and it's actually funny and original! Good stuff.

Cartman sure has quite the problem on his hands: Brag or conceal something awesome? I wonder if Wendy is aware of his business? I wanna see more of that story next chapter if possible, and I like that Kenny is a part of it. Cartman not wasting good water on Kenny was amusing too.

The Ike/Kyle interaction was perfect big/little brother stuff, and the line from Kyle's mom was funny in a cute sorta way.

This is cliche, but update again VERY soon!
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